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faye_dartmouth

H50 Fic: The Eleventh Hour 2/13

Jan 27, 2011 09:21

A/N: Thank you so much for the response to part one! And here begins the heart of the plot, which is never what I feel best about writing, but you can't have a fic of this length without something tying it together so hopefully it works :)

Previous parts here.

( Steve always knew where he was. )

fic, the eleventh hour, hawaii five-0

Comments 7

sgflutegirl January 27 2011, 20:55:18 UTC

Love this! The banter is perfect. Things are not looking so good for the guys. Can't wait for the next chapter.

faye_dartmouth January 29 2011, 13:23:13 UTC

Thank you! And all I can say is that things will get worse before they get better :)

sgflutegirl January 29 2011, 17:50:40 UTC

I'm looking forward to it! :-)

ratherastory January 28 2011, 02:43:33 UTC

This keeps getting better and better! And Danny really doesn't know when to shut up, does he? I half-expected Blaine to shoot him in his other knee. :/

faye_dartmouth January 29 2011, 13:24:05 UTC

Like I said, once Danny starts talking in my head, he rarely shuts up, so I'm glad it reads okay :)

Thanks!

serenity_pen January 29 2011, 15:00:48 UTC

AAgghh! You're torturing me...knowing you have this complete but that you are going to post it slowly....it's maddening. The banter is terrific and the pacing is good. I'm anxiously waiting for more!

faye_dartmouth February 2 2011, 15:45:08 UTC

LOL. I'm not posting TOO slowly. Twice a week seems reasonable. To me, anyway :)

Thanks!