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H50 Fic: The Eleventh Hour 1/13

Jan 24, 2011 13:09

Title: The Eleventh Hour

Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: I don't know why my muse insists on me writing longer fics, but it did, and so here's my first H50 chapter fic. This will have 13 parts, I believe and I should be posting on a regular schedule. Much thanks to geminigrl11 for providing a beta and consistent encouragement and squee. As for my other beta, moogsthewriter , let ( Read more... )

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ratherastory January 24 2011, 21:43:54 UTC

Oh, what a great start to the story! Can't wait to see the rest!

Your Danny voice is great. :)

You're writing in both my favourite fandoms, and I'm not entirely sure -since I really like your stuff- why I haven't asked if I can friend you before. May I?

faye_dartmouth January 25 2011, 20:44:50 UTC

I'm always up for new friends. Usually I friend back, if you don't mind :)

I'm glad my Danny voice sound right--honestly, sometimes once it gets in my head, it's hard to shut up.

Thanks!

ratherastory January 25 2011, 20:48:13 UTC

Are you kidding? I'd love it if you friended back! Makes things all nice and reciprocal. :)

honestly, sometimes once it gets in my head, it's hard to shut up.

Kind of like Danno himself, eh?

faye_dartmouth January 25 2011, 20:52:07 UTC

LOL, yes :) I suppose that's really part of his charm.

It's just problematic when sometimes I start writing dialogue and then I've written three pages and still not gotten to the point because Danny will just never let it go (and Steve's not very helpful either!).

Though, really, I'm not sure I should admit to hearing voices in my head like that... :)

ratherastory January 25 2011, 20:54:27 UTC

I promise to keep your secret. Besides, they talk in my head like that a lot too, and then I find I have to sort of sit on them to get them to shut up, or else they'd argue in circles for ten pages. :P

faye_dartmouth January 25 2011, 21:33:27 UTC

Hee. It is probably the curse of writers everywhere (fic and otherwise). And ten pages sounds about right. If you'll read the rest of this fic, you'll probably quickly see that the plot is nothing more than a vehicle to allow the guys to banter in stressful situations.

ratherastory January 25 2011, 21:34:49 UTC

Hell, that's 75% of the fun of this show!

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