White Collar fic: Playing the Odds (1/1)

Dec 28, 2013 21:24

Title: Playing the Odds

Disclaimer: I do not own White Collar.

A/N: Random whump, set vaguely in earlier seasons. Beta by lena7142. Fills my laceration prompt for hc_bingo.

Summary: At least it’s not a gun.

Neal has a thing about guns. )

fic, white collar, h/c

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embroiderama December 29 2013, 15:20:15 UTC
I love that this is both intense/scary and schmoopy at the same time. ♥

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faye_dartmouth January 16 2014, 02:00:30 UTC
LOL, I think 90 percent of what I write ends up being schmoopy. It's sort of inevitable :)

Thanks!

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embroiderama January 16 2014, 02:47:17 UTC
Oh hey, your reply reminded me--you should post this on whitecollarfic and/or whitecollarhc. I know more people would like to find it. :)

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faye_dartmouth January 16 2014, 02:49:23 UTC
I will think about that! I'm not really in the fandom, so I always feel a bit awkward posting stuff. But I also probably shouldn't write fics that no one reads...

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Playing the odds caseyf123 January 18 2014, 04:31:14 UTC
What a great little story. Really loved the banter between Peter and Neal. I love it when they get all awkward trying to express how they feel. Nice job.

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Re: Playing the odds faye_dartmouth February 6 2014, 02:55:37 UTC
Thank you so much! I do like the dynamic between these two in the show, and a little peril always draws it out :)

Thanks!

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frith_in_thorns January 18 2014, 04:41:42 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Loved the urgency, and Peter's concern, and also the insight into Neal's head :)

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faye_dartmouth February 6 2014, 02:56:35 UTC
I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :)

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pipilj January 18 2014, 06:50:44 UTC
Loved how the duo conveyed a depth of emotions with their banter.

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faye_dartmouth February 6 2014, 02:57:07 UTC
I do like using h/c to show the emotions beneath the banter. I'm glad it worked. Thanks!

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turtlebaby_02 January 18 2014, 07:43:58 UTC
Oh yay! This was terrific! I always love Neal!whump and schmoop and when the two coexist, I'm a happy reader! Thanks so much for sharing this!

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faye_dartmouth February 6 2014, 02:57:30 UTC
Schmoopy h/c is my favorite. Thank you for reviewing :)

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