Chaos fic: Man Plans, God Laughs

[faye_dartmouth]

Title: Man Plans, God Laughs

Disclaimer: I do not own Chaos.

A/N: lena7142 started a whump alphabet and one of the options under z was zippered. This is what my brain came up with. Thanks to postfallen for the beta.

Summary: Michael can’t plan on miracles.

Comments

[moogsthewriter]

YOU PUT BILLY IN A BODY BAG AND HAD HIM LIVE.

This. This is why we're friends.

(Well, okay, not the ONLY reason, but a big one. ;D)

Loved, loved, LOVED this. As per usual. You never disappoint. And as always, you nailed the characterizations spot on.

[faye_dartmouth]

Hahaha. I love that my ability to whump characters in crazy manners makes me a viable friend :)

(I have to admit, I liked writing this one a lot.)

Thanks!

(And your icon makes me miss Danny...)

[lena7142]

And no one spoke. No one dared speak.

But that didn’t change anything. It didn’t change the fact that the mission was a waste, that everything had fallen apart. It didn’t change the fact that Michael had been wrong and he’d been right.

And it didn’t change the fact that Billy was dead.

* FLAILS *

I honestly don't remember adding zippered to the whump alphabet or what it might have meant at the time, but I'm so glad it got put down on there because this is the best possible interpretation! All the moments where your heart jumps into your mouth during this fic- moments of fear, or horror, of grief, of relief, of joy... you really run the emotional gamut with this, and do it with the boys being fantastic as always. Wonderful!

[faye_dartmouth]

It could have been me to put zippered on the list -- but you made the list, so you still win at life. This fic was really fun to write in the way that maiming and torturing characters is fun for me.

LOL.

Thanks :)

[faye_dartmouth]

Michael POVs are becoming my favorite to write, I think. His controlling mind is so fun to mess with, LOL :)

And yeah -- the image of Billy in the bag, assumed dead was pretty much why I wrote this fic :)

Thanks!