Chaos fic: Afloat

[faye_dartmouth]

Title:  Afloat

Disclaimer:  Not mine.

A/N:  I wrote this on the prompting of altpointofview.  Beta provided by the amazing moogsthewriter.

Summary:  “Well, is it just me, or did we just get stranded at sea?”

Comments

[faye_dartmouth]

LOL, sometimes the hardest part of whump fic is finding an original context :)

Billy's eternal optimism is just so Billy--and I love that we all know there's a lot more to him underneath it.

Thanks!

[squeezynz]

good grief, but you are so good at writing this stuff...I can almost feel the sunburn, and taste the salt.

poor boys, glad they'll be better soon...

[faye_dartmouth]

LOL, yeah. I'm sort of a whump addict--nearly all of my plot bunnies revolve around maiming characters.

Anyway, thanks :)

[starrylizard]

lovely! Really enjoyed this. Particularly liked that Billy was so in character. :D

[faye_dartmouth]

It's hard with a show that was on so briefly to be completely confident in characterization, so I'm very glad you felt this rang true.

Thanks!

[starrylizard]

This: "Billy has the decency to look sheepish. “At least it’s not prime shark season, mate.”

So Billy! :D

[faye_dartmouth]

:) I'm going to miss this show so much. I already miss it so much. I really need to not fall in love with canceled shows. It's not good for my sanity.

[farad]

Excellent, as always! You have such a wonderful "Billy voice". I can hear every line with his accented voice. Well done!

[faye_dartmouth]

I so enjoy Billy, so I'm glad he comes across well in print :) Thanks!

[lymricks]

This is the first thing I've read in days, and I'm so glad I picked this one! Love your Billy voice every time. The chopped structure was a great way to get across everything they were experiencing as well, it really puts your readers in the situation. Loveloveloved it!

[faye_dartmouth]

It is always a sad state of things when there is no time to read fic. So I'm especially glad that this one hit the spot for you :)

Thanks!