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[fayded_mind]

Ok, so this is totally cheating, and I don't expect anyone to give me credit now for stuff I did a long time ago, but some of these tales have not been seen in present company and, I think, are read-worthy. While looking through the hard-drive for a particular story for a friend, I found lots of little treasures. If I broke the big things into

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Re: notes

[fayded_mind]

Yup. The main reason for the suggestion was the dialog in the beginning. It felt to me like that part belonged in another story. That's what's wrong with not being able to outline. My rhythm was off, and the lead-in, should really have been cut. Still, it's there and now it can be a part of something more. Write away, my dear. I'd love to see what tales we can collect.

I actually wrote this as prep for a Vampire game, believe it or not. There was a whole lot more in notes and timelines, but alas they are lost to time. Dan, remember the Toreador Primogen who thought of politics like jury duty and would rather draw than vote, but who wouldn't give up the status for anything? Julieta Elizabeta Racine, in the flesh and blood. . .

There was a point when teeth elongated into fangs. I didn't want to be too obvious with the reference to vampires, but I thought once I said that it was pretty clear. So I was a bit mysterious. I can live with that.

I look forward to reading your tale, my dear. That is what "I support it" meant right? (goading, prodding and winking at the same time).

Thanks for the support.