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Fic: The Field Trip (a Grandview story) Rated G

Mar 09, 2009 01:45

Title: The field trip

Series: Grandview

Rating: G

Word count: 2,644

Disclaimer: Sadly, neither Stargate Atlantis nor her characters belong to me. If they did the show would never have been canceled.

Summary: Nathan picked up a rectangle and looked at it with his brow furrowed in a purely John Sheppard fashion before looking up at Rodney and asking “ ( Read more... )

established relationship, grandview, g, mcshep, slash, series, sheppard, mckay, fic

Comments 16

tzzzz March 9 2009, 08:55:14 UTC

Yay! I was wondering when you'd write more. It was good to see John and Rodney being sweet with each other, plus putting stickers on a kid's back really is a genius idea.

fawkesielady_ed March 9 2009, 17:24:29 UTC

Thank you!
I'm sorry it took longer than expected to get this chapter up. I'm hoping to get the next one up much quicker.
thanks for the comment!

outsideth3box March 9 2009, 09:20:29 UTC

I seem to have missed a few of these and I don't know quite how it happened, but I gave you new color-coding so I hopefully won't miss any more.

Poor John. And Rodney, actually. Johns mood swings really aren't something he can control, and Rodney is going to be hard pressed not to bite back.

Luckily, so far John's pregnancy seems to be following a pretty normal pattern, so they can have some idea what's happening.

Looking forward to more.

fawkesielady_ed March 9 2009, 17:27:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm hoping to get the next chapter up much quicker than this one!

I have a grandview tag, but that would only take you to the ones posted here. there are a few that were only posted on casa_Mcshep.
I need to link to those and add them to the grandview tag too.

thanks for the comment!

vampyrehunterm March 9 2009, 13:26:07 UTC

That was a great chapter. Poor John, feeling rejected like that. Rodney's doing his best, even if he does accidentally stick his foot in his mouth.
Hope the job search is going well.

fawkesielady_ed March 9 2009, 17:29:27 UTC

Thank you.
Yes, poor John. little Nathan has no idea what he's done to him :(

Rodney really is trying... but it's so hard to not be... well... Rodney :D

I'm hoping to hear from La Petite by wednesday to find out if I got the job *hope hope* The interviews were very promising :D
Thanks!

fanarts_series March 9 2009, 16:14:44 UTC

yes genius Nathan it's rock, i enjoy this part, rodney is so sweet with john (poor john, damn hormones) i can't wait foe more, want the new baby.
thanks to share.

fawkesielady_ed March 9 2009, 17:22:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
I hope to get the next chapter done much quicker...

goddess47 March 9 2009, 17:25:49 UTC

I love when they have bad moments together, just like the rest of us. On the other hand, I suspect their making up is way hotter.... ::snerk::

Nice!

fawkesielady_ed March 9 2009, 17:31:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm hoping to get the next chapter posted much quicker than I got this one up.

I think we need to see some rough spots in their relationship... it keeps it real. And yes, I'm sure their making up IS much hotter.
(I know it's much hotter than anything that happens in MY relationship *rolls eyes*)
Thanks for the comment!