Well, it has been corrected! In a McShep way of course! I saw the link to this story on my friends page... can't remember who rec'd it but OMG! the episode doesn't hold a candle to this fic!
It's called Brainstormed. It's McShep (of course... how else should that episode have gone? certainly not Mckeller!!) And it's written by Kass and Sihaya Black. Here's the link!
The way brainstorm SHOULD have beenI think you have to fill out a thing to get to the story... but it doesn't cost anything and it is totally worth it!
A rating isn't listed but I'd say it's R. There are a few scenes toward the end that weren't in the actual show (Thank my Heavenly Lord almighty!!!! Praise the Lord Jesus Christ!!) but they're not really graphic.
So if you were made physically ill by Brainstorm... I say go read this! Even if you're not a slasher, or if you are but McShep isn't your OTP... it doesn't matter, if you HATED the episode, you must read this to clear your mind of the aweful visions in that episode!
go... read... I'll wait :)