Fic: "halfway to eternity"; Star Wars; Luke/Mara; PG

Oct 11, 2009 19:40

Title: halfway to eternity
Disclaimer: Umm SW characters belong to Lucas et al, and Mara is the property of Zahn.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: From 'Vision of the Force' upto just beyond 'Sacrifice' as well as spoilers for Union and general series spoilers
Pairing: Luke/Mara
Summary: Four stops for Luke on the way to eternity.
A/N: My fist Star Wars fic, ( Read more... )

luke skywalker, vignette, luke/mara, ben skywalker, fic, mara jade, star wars

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ansketil_rose October 12 2009, 07:28:44 UTC
Aw. I liked that. It was very sweet and the physical details were special. My favourite was no. 1 - space and loss.

breathes in the memory of her presence and gets up to face the day.

Nice phrasing.

All and all - very good.

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ansketil_rose October 12 2009, 07:29:52 UTC
Ah - I meant no. 3! >_< silly keyboard.

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favouriteyear October 12 2009, 08:01:54 UTC
Haha, cool thanks. :)

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withpins October 12 2009, 10:10:30 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. Exactly the ending I want to imagine for them. <3

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favouriteyear October 12 2009, 11:27:33 UTC
Yeah! Me too. :D

Thanks for reading!

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sandspirit October 12 2009, 16:46:24 UTC
Aw, this is beautiful. No. 1 is sweet, though I like no. 2 more, that is sweet despite the scars. No. 3 is heartbreaking, and I loved the reunion in the last one. :)

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favouriteyear October 12 2009, 16:48:47 UTC
thanks v. much. :D

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dm_lunsford October 13 2009, 02:38:53 UTC
This fic made me smile. Thanks for sharing.

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favouriteyear October 13 2009, 04:03:01 UTC
Glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for reading. :D

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