Sherlock Fic: Distraction

[fathomlessspite]

So I watched Sherlock and loved it :) Although the second one didn't hold my interest as much as the rest....

It has in fact encouraged me to write the most porn-y, in fact the only vaguely porny thing I have ever written!

Title:  Distraction
Fandom: Sherlock
Rating: R/NC17
Pairing: Sherlock/John (unrequited?), Sherlock/HisHand
Word Count: 533
Summary:

Comments

[how_to_shine]

This is amazing...I'd love to see followup to it, how John reacts etc. So good :D

[fathomlessspite]

Thank you :) I'm not quite sure how I'd write his reaction...perhaps I'll have to go and watch the episodes all again for research purposes... :)

[deepbluemermaid]

Ahh, I do like fics where arousal destroys Sherlock's brain-mouth filter - good stuff tends to come out! I'd love to see John's response to this unexpected honesty...

[fathomlessspite]

He has a brain-mouth filter?!
Thank you for commenting!

[warriorbot]

For a PWP this has fantastic depths of characterisation! I really enjoyed this on a level beyond simply *unf*.

This line "It's rather difficult to imagine that you're sucking me off when you're hovering in the doorway like that."

is made of win!

Would you consider reposting to http://community.livejournal.com/221b_slash/ (the dedicated BBC'verse slash comm)

[fathomlessspite]

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so! I always think a good pwp should have some characterisation sneakily hidden in there, so I'm glad you thought i managed it!

That line was where the story started, I kinda built the rest around it!

I shall consider it *wanders of to investigate comm*

[warriorbot]

(sorry - that sounded wrong - for /anything/ this had fantastic depths of characterisation but it's particularly thrilling to find it lavished on something this hot!)

[fathomlessspite]

It sounds good both ways :) Thank you!

[telperion_15]

Oh yes, very nice! :D

[fathomlessspite]

Thank you :)