stages of decomposition and disintegration

Aug 13, 2008 10:38

stages of decomposition and disintegration
susan/rosalie. pg. 235.
She doesn't recognize herself anymore, but it doesn't matter -- there are no mirrors in the blonde's face, only empty eyes that might as well be.
this is a narnia/twilight crossover. written for my flist, because they're amazing. :)

my sadness is always only mine )

* twilight, * narnia, * crossover, ? noncanon pairing, & fanfic ;, fic type: drabbles, pairing: rosalie/susan, pairing type: femslash

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jacyevans August 13 2008, 16:21:17 UTC
AKLJHLKNHLN. EXCUSE ME WHILE I TRY TO STRING WORDS TO FORM A COHERENT THOUGHT.

KAI, YOU ARE AMAZING, DID YOU KNOW? NO? WELL, I SHALL TELL YOU - YOU ARE AMAZING XINFINITY

This. THIS. You nailed both characters perfectly and the little insights into both of their minds are FANTASTIC. Especially this:

I'll never die.

She barks a laugh. That's almost worse.

GUHHHHHHHH. YOU HAVE KILLED ME WITH THE AWESOME. AND I LOVE IT.

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 16:21:59 UTC
KDHGVAD I FEEL SO LOVEDD!

<33333 THANK YOUU!

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 19:51:19 UTC
also i find it hilarious that you are now a femslash fan.

AHAHA DON'T TRY AND TELL YOURSELF OTHERWISE. :D

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 16:40:19 UTC
oh my, thank you!

i think i will :DDD

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lastupenda August 13 2008, 20:21:22 UTC
i loved this also kai. these two are just sooo perfect for eachother

What happened to your family?

They all left me. I know exactly where they are.

THANK YOU FOR REMINDING ME EXACTLY WHY I STOPPED READING THE NARNIA BOOK. da mn you lewis for kicking out my favourite character.

They are both trying to escape: the vampire from the truth, and the queen from ghosts.

gah. i loved the wordplay here.

Heaven is off-limits for me.

How do you know?

I've been there.

OMGF KAI, STOP MAKING ME FEEL SAD. FIRST LEAH, NOW THIS. WHY DO ALL MY FAVOURITE CHARACTERS GET THE WORST END OF THE DEAL.

poor susan. D:

write me moaaarrrr <333

lol i'm such a dedicated fan, i hound out all your fics. oh well.

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 20:25:16 UTC
OMG YES I HATE HOW SUSAN GOT GIPPED. STUPID CS LEWIS D:<

omg you should know all i write is angsty femslash okay

LOOK A FANGIRL WHUT

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lastupenda August 13 2008, 20:30:14 UTC
OMG IKR? THAT'S WHY I NEVER FINISHED READING NARNIA. I GOT FED UP OFF ALL RELIGIOUSNESS BUT THE SUSAN THING SLAYED ME. FU LEWIS

lolol hahah i know. <3

LOOK WE BOTH FANGIRL EACHOTHER SO ITS ALRIGHT

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 20:38:14 UTC
LOL SO TRUE >:( YOU HAVEN'T WRITTEN MUCH FIC LATELY

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likecharity August 13 2008, 21:09:43 UTC
Oh god. OH GOD. THIS IS REALLY AMAZING.

I'm not really into Twilight, but I read the first two books and have a general understanding, and I was intrigued by the pairing and, this, this is really beautiful. ♥

I WANT TO QUOTE IT ALL BUT I WILL SETTLE FOR THIS:

They are both trying to escape: the vampire from the truth, and the queen from ghosts.

It isn't working well.

AND THIS:

Heaven is off-limits for me.

How do you know?

I've been there.

Those bits really stood out to me. :)

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kaiwynn August 13 2008, 21:11:13 UTC
it really means a lot to me that you liked this! :D i'm so glad you decided to read it, hehehe.

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kaiwynn August 14 2008, 16:15:41 UTC
LOL YES DEFINITELY. SHE DA BOMB.

<33333

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kaiwynn August 14 2008, 17:11:58 UTC
OMG YKW I THINK I WILL TOO.

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