Mar 31, 2005 12:03
YEP! My english class is finally getting into poetry...Wee...Anyway I TRIED to write a sonnet but it doesnt really follow all the rules a sonnet should have but I like the way it sounds so I'll put it here and yall can input xD
Orbs of Crimson shade, how I long to lose myself within your stare.
I watch silently from the shadows, this pain I cannot bare.
Do you not see me as I stand before your form?
Am I truly that invisible, my love for you forlorn?
I know my being is tangible, this feeling just the same.
Will you take pity on my plea? Or has Cupid flawed his aim?
Tentatively my hand extends to caress your tender cheek
Hues of scarlet pierce the soul, knees of mine go weak.
The loneliness I know you feel will no longer plague your mind.
For within in me is a cure...For only you to find.
Ehhh, like I've said before I LOVE red eyes and to I'm sure most of your surprise that wasn't exactly intended to be about hi-chan. I'm just trying to express my love for...scarlet hues xD -SIGH- God, I need a man I'm so freaking bored without one e_e OH!, OH!, OH!, OH!!!! -twitch- I'M GETTING A KITTY!!! WEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! x3 I guess some cat-whore at my dads work had kittens and he's going to bring one home. I am so freakin happy I LOVE CATS! AH! I think its mostly because I could never have one but meh o.-; I've recently discovered my favorite song on the new 3 doors down CD and that would be "father's son" I just like the way he sings the word "pain" And the beginning of the song sounds hot >_> Here it is for those of you who dont know it:
In the glare of a neon sign
She laid her body down
The damned walked in beside her
And laid his money down
He said don't try to scream now
But I want this one to hurt
And tonight my pretty one
I'm gonna get my money's worth
OMG! When I heard that part I was like AH! Thats sooo hot!