Original Fiction: i let a dinosaur eat your heart out

[fated_addiction]

Comments

[asweetdownfall]

Gorgeous. ♥

And I love the phrase "seven sins of curiosity." It's just lovely.

[fated_addiction]

thank you, love. glad you enjoyed it.

[waverly_place]

Beautifully written, I love the opening two sentences. And I also loved the "seven sins" line.

I noticed one thing though.
Her lashes kisses her cheeks
I think you meant her lashes kiss her cheeks.

Just lovely.

[fated_addiction]

oops. *grin* thank you for pointing it out.

glad you enjoyed it.

[variablestar]

I've read a lot of your work in the past, before I had a livejournal myself, so it's exciting to me to be able to comment in this manner.

But, as always, gorgeous. Your style is like little thoughts that somehow string together, always connecting but still leaving so much up to the imagination. I love it. Completely.

[fated_addiction]

well, thank you so much.

i'm so pleased that you've enjoyed it. and thank you for reading.

[operatingroom]

(important notes about good Catholics: oh, god, do they lie; little boys and little girls curling with seven sins of curiosity because, in the end, it’s inescapable.)

That was nice.

I really like your dialogue. But -- well, I really just like the way you write.

[fated_addiction]

*grins* thank you. glad you enjoyed it.

[energycurrency]

oh... this was just beautiful. i loved this.

my favorite is: Sunrise snapped her neck in June.

[fated_addiction]

thank you, babe. glad you enjoyed it.