Prison Break ficlet: we hide in ways

Mar 16, 2007 12:33

we hide in ways
prison break, sara (michael/sara), r, 588 words, general season two, for vreeland. who bribed me with me music. yes. i can always be bribed with music. lots and lots of brilliant music.

Daddy’s legs go twitch, twitch, twitch.

a little girl with a story to tell or two. )

pairing: sara/michael, character: sara, show: prison break

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modernthirst March 16 2007, 17:35:14 UTC
Ohhhhhhhhh god. Yeah. That was so, so good. Wow.

and Sara always likes the taste of a sigh
this is like the definition of Sara Tancredi, and I cannot explain why IJUSTKNOW.

thank you thank you thank you! that is perrrrrrfect.

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fated_addiction March 16 2007, 20:23:30 UTC
welcome.

*grins* keep bribing me and who knows, lol, i'll write anything. i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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stablerbenson March 16 2007, 19:19:18 UTC
Oh, how I've been waiting for the day you'd write Prison Break, and I am definitely not disappointed. This was brilliant, absolutely brilliant!

I especially loved this: Her we can’t is ready, but Sara’s always been a smart girl. Two words are merely pretty things to say. I knew you'd do Michael/Sara justice, hah.

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fated_addiction March 16 2007, 20:23:57 UTC
thank you. *grins* glad you enjoyed it.

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rosie_spleen March 16 2007, 22:15:09 UTC
Fantastic and utterly Fabulous (capitals = importance)

So damn raw and wonderful. Your descriptions left me breathless (this is a bit dramatic, I know, but true)

Rehab tastes like dust. - this is a standout among many lines of this fic that are special. And the ending is also riveting.

You've really captured the character of Sara amazingly well in such a short passage - the whole daddy/princess/drug addicted picture.

and she’s not that much of an idealist, he’ll never be done with this mess. - also spot on and a totally plausible musing of the future of their relationship

Great, great writing.

BTW - hope you were bribed with some excellent music!

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fated_addiction March 17 2007, 00:29:10 UTC
thank you. *grins* glad you enjoyed it.

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silverstars March 17 2007, 00:17:29 UTC
This is absolutely gorgeous. Your writing style is incredible. Wow. Loved it.

(I really, really hope Anna keeps bribing you, because yes. We need more of this.)

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fated_addiction March 17 2007, 00:28:30 UTC
lol. i'm easily guided. *g* with music.

i'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for reading.

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teenwitch77 March 17 2007, 01:08:53 UTC
yessss.

you must write most prison break. must. your sara is perfect and i adore the angsty in this. wonderful ♥

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fated_addiction March 17 2007, 01:09:59 UTC
i take visa, check, or mastercard. or music, if you must.

lol. i'm so glad you enjoyed it, love.

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