L&O: SVU drabble: you can’t take away the kiss of the color red from the motel sign

[fated_addiction]

Title: you can’t take away the kiss of the color red from the motel sign that reads vacant
Fandom: L&O: SVU
Characters/Pairings: Olivia, Olivia/Elliot
Word Count: 544
Rating: R
Spoilers: General S8. ♥
Summary: The room is white, the sheets are tan, and the heater moans clink, clink, clink! after you shut the door. Hello, intermission.
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[odakota_rose]

Whoa... You've got such talent for writing these. Angsty and always gorgeous reads. And hot. Can't forget that. ;)

[shimmeree]

Nicely written.

[itcouldbelove]

this is great. very poetic.

[cathiexx]

Um, so I just found this. And it made me happy. It made me extremely happy.

♥

The way you manage to capture Olivia here, like this, lost and lonely and aching and wanting -- it makes me shiver. It's her, brilliantly. And the way you describe everything between her and Elliot is perfect.

The ending kills me. You have a way with words and sentences and thank you for this. <3 Such love. Adding to mems.

[wintergreen126]

You could do this for hours, dip into a romanticism that the two of you have been trying, desperately, to avoid because there is always someone else.

perfect. so close, yet there's that manifest distance. very nicely done.

thanks for sharing :o)