House fic: lost in paradise outside the city limits 4/?

[fated_addiction]

Title: lost in paradise outside the city limits
Fandom: House, M.D
Characters/Pairings: Cameron, House/Cameron
Word Count: 1451
Rating: Eventually NC-17
Spoilers: Post No Reason. ♥
Summary: She understands that, in these suspended frames of time, she’s lost more of herself to him than she can control. For him, it’s four days to solve it all.

Comments

[jovsg]

GAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWD, it's been forever since I've been FIRST!

Cuz, I'm mature like that. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I love this fic like whoa. I'm gonna go read now, party w/ friends, respond later I PROMISE!

*tackles you*

[fated_addiction]

*laughs* ♥

[jovsg]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand I'm back! Phew, today kind of ran away from me. It's already well past 9....huh.

Anyway, the fic. As you know is love. Seriously, between you and teenwitch77, I'm dying here! GUh, the bed scene was just....and I quote....#$(*&#@_($)*@#_$(*@$)%*&$(*%&#$(*%&#$! Sometimes, there's more to be said for the subtlety of sexual tension that you can cut with a knife versus all out fucking. D'ya know what I mean? They're hanging on a wire, these two. The looks, the fragmented conversation, I could see the Eye!Secks in my head as clearly as I can see it on the show.

The porn channel thing was LOL, because you know every hotel has one. Ha! Realllllllllllly looking forward to seeing what happens next!

As always, the writing was pitch perfect.

[fated_addiction]

*laughs* ♥

It's all about pushing and pushing to their wit's end. It's going to be interesting, that's for sure. *grins*

I'm so glad you're enjoying, love.

[fated_addiction]

Thank you. *grins* I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[fated_addiction]

I'm tempted to analyze now. It might be school getting to me, but I'm seeing power struggles and more in the unsaid than the verbalised. If that's what you're aiming for, you're dead on. If that's something that just came out, you're a subconscious genius. Either ways, kudos. *laughs*

*laughs* It's actually exactly what I'm aiming for. ♥ As for the word, "eerie", thank you. *grins* I like the word too.

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[fated_addiction]

Of course you can ask. *grins

[demijon]

I just read 3, and now 4. It gets better and better, the build-up from each part is tangible and irresistable. Amazing, the control you have words and with the way the piece, as a whole, unfolds.

I loved, in particular, this entire section from "She knows that he would prefer the fight" to "They both lost something that night. He was too cruel. She was too careless. But things happen, she guesses." Possibly because I had recently watched Love Hurts (was it that the episode title? I'm pretty sure it is).

You bring back the trepidation, the inevitable feelings of hurt and uncertainty from that dinner that carries over into this moment, stuck in a room together. And with the uncomfortably close proximity comes an unspoken opportunity again.

Awesome. Just awesome.

[fated_addiction]

Love Hurts was like watching a car crash. *laughs* It was so unbelievably painful. But sticking them in a room, alone, is always fun to do.

*grins* I'm so glad you're enjoying it. ♥ Thank you!

[demijon]

Oh, don't thank me. You're the one providing the reading plesure. *g*

It was like watching a car crash--from a House/Cameron shipping perspective. I don't think I can legitimately call myself a shipper of any sort, but you are rapidly persuading me in that direction.

I think that scene rather reinforces the point of not setting conditions when your boss wants to hire you back. *laughs* Certainly not the personal kind. And certainly not when your boss has a gift for snark and doesn't flinch from being verbally brutal when he wants to. I admire Cameron for taking the initiative, though, and going after what she wanted.

[teenwitch77]

I'm loving this in unbelieveable ways. I really like the image of them lying on the bed facing each other, neither of them moving forward or back. Just there. Um yeah, I'm not putting this very articulately. But you get me, right ;D So yes, much love for this. I love the way it's slowly building a sense of anticipation. The kind of slow, underlying anticipation that slowly threatens to kill you.

[fated_addiction]

*grins* If I wasn't all over the place because of the nummy drinks that I just had, I'd tell you thank you in an eloquent manner.

*laughs*

But thanks. ♥