[fic] [Lockdown]

[fate_oblivion]

Rating; T (for profanities and... eventual suggestiveness?)
Summary; In which Okita and Kagura decide to break up, and Gintoki just had to witness the whole thing. [Okita/Kagura]
Warning/s; I'm not good at handling Gintoki's POV. Because he's too awesome. *A*
Note/s; Written for iu_fanfiction's 20th challenge // prompt; Star-crossed. With a twist! o/

Comments

[blackmarquise]

At first, I thought: "No way, a break up on Valentine's day?"
BUt then Super Gin-chan mediator of Love came and made it all better
Like GIntoki said they're lucky to have found each other in the a swhow full of crazy characters!!!

Oh , I love this pairing

And Happy Valentine's day to you too!

[fate_oblivion]

I totally dig irony. XD A-Also I'm tad a bit bitter towards V-day so yeah.

Thank you, and happy Valentines' to you, too~!

[neko11lover]

Oooh, a GinHiji part (tiny, but lol).

Gin-san is cupid in disguise, and come to think of it, he's right on being lucky with his pair here. Nice job handling the cliched break up under the rain during Valentines Day! :D You're really one of the few people who could pull it off.

And fff-- Kagura going down the patch of masochism? I couldn't even imagine it. XD

[fate_oblivion]

Pffft yes, a little GinHiji for a bonus since I can't nail down their characters yet. XD

... Now I somehow can't rid of the Gintoki-in-cupid-guise in my brain. I couldn't resist, lol. Lovey-dovey timez is more of a cliche during V-day. XD

Unless she hangs out too often with Sa-chan-- er, maybe even that wouldn't work out well.

[darklogic09]

Thank you~! ^^ I was fearing the lack of sadism and the OOC-ness (and reading it back, I've noticed the lack of a concrete atmoshpere, too ;A;).