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Bound by these lies

Aug 19, 2012 22:10

Title: Bound by these lies.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Angst, explicit sex
Spoilers: None
Characters: Eleven/Jack Harkness
Word Count: 1,400
Summary: Jack had been lying to himself for so long it had become second nature, a safety net. He knew how the Doctor saw him, that he barely tolerated Jack's presence. No matter how hard he tried to bury ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

iolo1234 August 19 2012, 13:03:42 UTC

Wow that was beautifully written and very powerful. It was also so Jack and the Doctor.

fate_incomplete August 20 2012, 09:07:09 UTC

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!

tardisjournal August 19 2012, 16:33:56 UTC

Beautifully written, really hot and angsty as hell! Well-done.

As I was reading this I was thinking that maybe, finally, this was a version of the Doctor that could accept, even love, Jack back. How twisted is it that Jack might finally get what he wants, and he can't accept it. My heart breaks for both of them. :(

sandysan2013 August 19 2012, 18:31:22 UTC

Yep, what they said. Loved this much.

fate_incomplete August 20 2012, 09:09:51 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

fate_incomplete August 20 2012, 09:09:22 UTC

Thank you so much, this was a lot of fun to write. I love the idea that Eleven would be more accepting of Jack, maybe love him back, if either of them were able to accept it. Glad you enjoyed this.

a_phoenixdragon August 19 2012, 19:59:57 UTC

OH FUCK.

I TOLD YOU...I-I TOLD YOU. YOU HAVE UNDONE ME. I AM BREAKING! GODS, I NEED THIS. SO DELICIOUS AND PERFECT AND HOT AND RAGGED-EDGED AND RAW AND NEEDY AND BEAUTIFUL AND WRONG AND GORGEOUS. FUCK. I WANT THE DOCTOR'S VIEW NOW. I WANT HIM TO FUCKING CRAWL -

*WEEPS*

YOU HAVE KILLED ME.

thankyou...

*CLINGS*

fate_incomplete August 20 2012, 09:16:07 UTC

*dances* So glad you enjoyed this hun!!! It really shouldn't be this fun writing angsty Eleven/Jack, but damn it, it is! I would love to write something with the Doctor's POV for this, maybe if you twist my arm, or just look sideways at me, frankly I wouldn't take much convincing. Maybe I can sneak some writing in over the next day or two, before I will have to hide myself away over the weekend to do two uni assignments that are due on Monday. Better yet, I am taking the first week of September off, so looking forward to having some time to write more goodies for you!

*holds you tight*

a_phoenixdragon August 27 2012, 14:24:30 UTC

Oh, btw...COMPLETELY forgot to tell you...

Pimped you on Three Settings *cackles*

AND WATCH ME DO IT AGAIN, TOO!!

*TACKLES YOU*

redpearl_cao August 19 2012, 21:29:59 UTC

fate_incomplete August 20 2012, 09:10:19 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

gigglinggigi August 27 2012, 03:51:51 UTC

Oh yes, yes YES! Perfect! Oh have stolen words from my Jack!muses' head my dear. That was breathe taking. You so need to have the Doctor school him now. Please? I beg this of you! Then e- mail me so I know you have done so. May I friend you so That I can keep up with your stories and message you my e-mail.

Happy writing.
Gigi

fate_incomplete August 27 2012, 04:48:23 UTC

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it! I will in all likelihood write an Eleven pov piece for this, . Feel free to friend away, more the merrier!

gigglinggigi August 27 2012, 04:54:30 UTC

Oh I can't wait! And thank you.