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Paper Lanterns

Aug 04, 2012 16:10

Title: Paper Lanterns.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Characters: Eleven/River
Word Count: 470
A/N: Written for betawho's prompt of Eleven/River- balloons, but I wrote it with paper lanterns instead. I hope you enjoy it hun.
Summary: River and Eleven watch a lantern festival. There is nothing else she would wish for.

( River watched as the darkness was lit up with thousands of tiny pinpricks of light... )

hello sweetie, fic, doctor who: love of the impossible, hyper sexy eleven

Comments 4

betawho August 4 2012, 06:56:02 UTC

Aww, that was beautiful and heartbreaking.

I got a very "Tangled" vibe. But that makes complete sense for the Doctor and River. If every there was a "tangled" relationship, it's theirs.

(And I like the idea that she keeps deliberately having these moments and adventures,"not just for him, but for every memory, every bit of frustration, and joy, all the adventure that had filled her life, for however long it could last.")

fate_incomplete August 4 2012, 07:52:10 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to do something a bit quieter and peaceful with your prompt, but I couldn't help making it just a little bit sad in the end.

a_phoenixdragon August 4 2012, 20:16:45 UTC

So, so beautiful. SO BEAUTIFUL!!

Ohhh, River...

*HUGS*

fate_incomplete August 4 2012, 23:07:59 UTC

*squishes* Thanks hun!