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Light & Ash

Jul 10, 2012 19:22

Title: Light & Ash.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst, Character Death
Spoilers: None
Characters: Amy, Eleven
Word Count: 350
A/N: Written for the who_contest prompt - Light
Summary: Everything else was hazy, distant, unimportant. There was just the play of light on the ash. Yet that ash signified something, something important...

( Particles of ash drifted in the air... )

the girl who waited, bowties are cool, fic, oh glorious angst, eleven/amy: the romance that'll never be, doctor who: love of the impossible, hyper sexy eleven

Comments 5

a_phoenixdragon July 10 2012, 11:46:41 UTC

Ohhhhhh!! OHHH, I!!!!

*SOBS*

DAMMIT...why'd you do this to me?!

*CLINGS*

goreplz July 10 2012, 14:06:30 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. :(
This was great! I love angst and I love Amy/Eleven angst more than anything in the history of ever.

paynesgrey July 13 2012, 10:21:40 UTC

Oh, this is very heart-wrenching and sad, but the imagery is fantastic in this. Well done.

lonewytch July 15 2012, 07:50:33 UTC

Fantastic imagery of the drifting ash in the light, and the confused thoughts of a semi conscious Amy. The ending packs a punch when we realise what's happened, and it is tangibly sad :(

easytheretyger July 18 2012, 16:15:39 UTC

This is really moving and beautiful.
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