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Unspoken concerns

Apr 10, 2012 20:28

Title: Unspoken concerns.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None. Set sometime in series 2 before Reichenbach Fall.
Characters: John, Mycroft, Sherlock
Word Count: 600
Summary: A short conversation in the rain, in which neither John nor Mycroft give voice to mutual concerns of Sherlock's boredom leading him back to dangerous ways.

( The older Holmes looked infuriatingly dry beneath his umbrella... )

sherlock/john: people are going to talk, fic, sherlock: a matter of deduction

Comments 6

a_phoenixdragon April 10 2012, 13:28:22 UTC

GODS.

Perfect.

I give up.

All around.

*Sobs*

*Clings to you*

Thank you...*whimpers*

obsessionality April 10 2012, 18:39:50 UTC

oh wow. lovely lovely lovely. <3

fanbot April 10 2012, 19:46:56 UTC

I like.

the_silverdoe April 10 2012, 20:58:45 UTC

Lovely, I like the way you wrote them both. :)

ivyclarice April 12 2012, 11:21:10 UTC

This was wonderful! You did a great job leaving tangible the unspoken worry between them, and both men were so wonderfully in character.

It also had a very satisfying ending, both in the ultimate outcome and the implied rue in the final sentence. This made my day!