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Never a right time for us

Mar 01, 2012 21:04

Title: Never a right time for us.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: None.
Characters: Eleven/Amy, Amy/Rory
Word Count: 4,000
A/N: Written for who_contest prompt - miscalulations
Summary: Eleven and Amy are stuck in the TARDIS for a year after an incident with a super nova. Some things are never meant to be, even in a stolen year together.

( Tumbling uncontrolled, splintering time, a scream... )

the girl who waited, bowties are cool, fic, eleven/amy: the romance that'll never be, doctor who: love of the impossible, roranicus pondicus, hyper sexy eleven

Comments 18

lonewytch March 1 2012, 13:34:59 UTC

This is just absolutely brilliant!

I love how you've kind of taken the idea from The Girl Who Wated and twisted and changed it in an amazing way to craft this story, which is actually quietly very moving.

There's a sense of....stillness and beauty about it, as they wait inder the light of the supernova shining in through the roof...i find the description of it really haunting. The way they can see Rory slowly across the room is brilliant and weird and...

This fic has it all really sweetie, great sci fi idea, emotion, yearning...LOVE IT.

fate_incomplete March 2 2012, 09:04:20 UTC

*hugs* thanks hun! I was having trouble settling on what story to write for the last couple of weeks, and then this idea jumped me and flew onto the paper. Glad the quietness of it worked, the Doctor if usually running about everywhere, but it is those quiet little moments that mean so much. It was nice to give them all that time.

a_phoenixdragon March 1 2012, 14:12:35 UTC

OMG...BEAUTIFUL. WRENCHING. HURTY. AND SO ELEVEN.

*SOBS*

thankyou...

*CLINGS*

fate_incomplete March 2 2012, 09:27:33 UTC

*hugs* Thanks hun!! Seems poor Eleven never gets what he wants in my fics.

tasty_kate March 2 2012, 12:23:32 UTC

I read this before work and-- wow!! This was SO good! The plot line was really unique and creative. I haven't had the time to read fic lately but when I read the summary on this one, I *had* to! And it did not disappoint! You kept them very much in character and I felt like this could have easily been cannon. Great job!

fate_incomplete March 2 2012, 13:10:39 UTC

Thanks so much! Once I got the idea for this, it all just flowed and I had a lot of fun writing it. I'm happy you enjoyed it and thought it cannon-ish, that makes me even happier!

easytheretyger March 3 2012, 20:54:00 UTC

Loved this. Beautiful structure and I liked the introspection from the Doctor. Gorgeously written, I could picture it all perfectly.

fate_incomplete March 3 2012, 22:52:10 UTC

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it.

charlottetrips March 5 2012, 05:44:15 UTC

That was brilliant. I have a hard time swallowing 11/Amy usually because the writer just does away with Rory as if he's nothing (which he's not!). But here, you acknowledge his importance, you don't make Amy look like a hoe and the Doctor totally acts like the Doctor. There was a peace to this that was a bit unexpected and I enjoyed reading it.

fate_incomplete March 5 2012, 12:08:11 UTC

I have a hard time writing Eleven/Amy when Rory is around, it just doesn't feel right, even though I adore the idea of the two of them. That's why it pretty much always ends up unrequited in one way or another or platonic. Glad you enjoyed it hun. I wanted to play with the peacefulness through this, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. They are always running around, and its those little moments that are more emotional for me.