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fate_incomplete

There are no right words...

Dec 12, 2011 20:39

Title: There are no right words...
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: General spoilers for River's storyline.
Characters: Eleven/River
Word Count: 1,200
A/N: Written for the who_contest prompt: Exits and Entrances
Summary: She was always coming into and out of his life, in no particular order, a frustrating, irrepressible and irresistible force. He ( Read more... )

hello sweetie, bowties are cool, fic, oh glorious angst, doctor who: love of the impossible, hyper sexy eleven

Comments 16

a_phoenixdragon December 12 2011, 11:37:39 UTC

Ohhhhh....OH!!

oh.

Are you trying to kill me?! YOU ARE, AREN'T YOU?!

Dammit...IwillnotcryIWillNotCryIWILLNOTCRY!!

*Sobs*

Thank you...

*CLINGS*

fate_incomplete December 12 2011, 20:24:47 UTC

Thanks hun. Hands tissues...no, not trying to kill you at all *whistles innocently*

*hugs*

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fate_incomplete December 12 2011, 20:36:13 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

promethia_tenk December 12 2011, 15:42:06 UTC

Lovely little scenes and a perfectly, beautifully, wrenching ending. I also really loved how you handled the timey-wimey in this: it felt natural and poetic and not obtrusive.

fate_incomplete December 12 2011, 20:38:36 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. The timey wmiey can be complicated to write sometimes.

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fate_incomplete December 12 2011, 20:39:05 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

fannishliss December 12 2011, 19:44:40 UTC

really beautiful. Thanks for giving this to River and the Doctor.

fate_incomplete December 12 2011, 20:39:52 UTC

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed it.