Lonely Moments...

[fate_incomplete]

Title: Lonely Moments...
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: Nothing specific, set sometime post 6.13
Characters: Eleven, OC (with thoughts of Amy and River)
Word Count: 3,900
Summary: There are far too many lonely moments in the universe. The Doctor shares a moment with a young women to change one of them...though maybe it is him that is

Comments

[twitchbell]

This is a very lovely story - bitter-sweet and beautiful. I especially liked your use of 'book-ends' to frame the main story. Thank you. :)

[fate_incomplete]

Thanks you so much, glad you enjoyed it.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Ohhhhh....ohh, this went top to my favs list immediately!! Just so gorgeous and haunting and...so, so HIM. And I loved your OC, which (let me be the first to tell you) is rare almost to an impossibility! Thank you honey - for finishing this wonderful piece and sharing it with us.

*Clings to you*

Just...gorgeous. Thank you.

*HUGS*

[fate_incomplete]

Aw thanks hun. I don't think I have written a major OC in any of the thirty odd fics I have posted on LJ for that reason, they are hard to get right. But this story wouldn't work any other way. I really wanted to write something showing his lonliness after he left everyone behind. Show him changing some small insignificant moment becuase he empathised with her lonliness. Also my first DW fic with an actual plot \0/ and surprisingly I found Eleven's dialougue easier to do than I thought, also really enjoy writing him from an outside POV.

Thanks hun *huggles*

[lost_4198]

This was beautiful! Your writing and flow was perfect. Everything just worked together. You made both the OC and the Doctor very real. You really captured him and his thoughts and feelings. Wonderful job :D

[fate_incomplete]

Thanks so much, this was my first DW fic with any sort of plot. Very happy the Doctor's characterisation worked for you, he is such a complex character to write.