Fake - Part 5

Jan 16, 2020 22:31



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daisukidesu3 January 16 2020, 17:07:34 UTC
I think it’s time for them to get the police involved....

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farah_hamiza January 25 2020, 15:18:16 UTC
Hmmm... yes, they definitely need to tell the police. Nino is just being stubborn...

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farah_hamiza January 25 2020, 15:18:58 UTC
Yes, he should tell the others about it... Maybe they can help him solve the problem...

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arashi07 January 17 2020, 06:57:15 UTC
Things have started getting out of hand now..I hope Nino will be able to discuss this with the others, especially Ohno, and not trying to solve it by himself.

Yeah, we should meet up someday! will msg you when I'm in Johor! :D

Thank you for writing! Looking forward to read what happens next! <3

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farah_hamiza January 25 2020, 15:19:57 UTC
Yes, he should really discuss with the others. They could help him solve the problem.

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gambitsfox January 18 2020, 15:29:39 UTC
Ok, first off i thought i had missed a chapter when it started. The ending of #4 didnt match the beginning of #5. At first i thought it was a dream....but then i realized this is how you wanted to explain the accident. Anyway, great chapter. Nino is just too overwelmed with guilt and stress at this point to make the right decision. Maybe Ohno is more aware of whats happening than we think? They need to bring in the rest of their friends too. More eyes and ears keeping watch could make a difference. If she is not the culprit then possibly someone with power over her.....like maybe her boss could be? His boss did give him that work to fix. He knew that would keep him away from Ohno for awhile.
More chapters please!😊💙💛

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farah_hamiza January 25 2020, 15:21:55 UTC
I hope my way of writing a story isn't too weird.

Hmmm... maybe it's his boss... or, maybe it's someone else. Let's see who she was in the next part, okay.

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