Ficlet: Authenticity

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Title: Authenticity
Characters: Oz, Willow
Rating: PG
A/N Written for prompt 3, episode ‘Inca Mummy Girl, at Phantasmagoria: ‘This is the first time Oz really notices Willow. What are his thoughts about her?’

Comments

[thismaz]

Lovely. Great mix of Oz cool intellect and speculation. Note to self: don’t suggest to Devon. Real possibility of literal interpretation. Not good. made me laugh. Thank you. A laugh, at 6am on a Monday morning, is a wonderful thing.

[brutti_ma_buoni]

*g* Well that is an achievement! Glad to make you giggle.

[snogged]

Great use of stream of consciousness!

This felt very Oz-like :)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Thank you! He's fun to write - plenty of layers.

[rebcake]

Sheep in hookers’ clothing. No, too harsh.

One of the great things about Oz is his internal dialog. It's truly weird, so it's probably in his best interest to be laconic. But when it comes out, it's always interesting! You've captured it perfectly!

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Yep, I think most people wouldn't get Oz's brain even if he did explain it all. But it makes it all the more fascinating to play with his thoughts.

[moscow_watcher]

Adorable. You write Oz' stream-of-consciousness perfectly. The bit with a minor chord is particularly touching.

And this:

Might as well paint our asses blue and make gibbon noises.
Note to self: don’t suggest to Devon. Real possibility of literal interpretation. Not good.

is absolutely priceless! :)))))))))))))))

[brutti_ma_buoni]

*g* I do wonder what that pair ever talked about apart from music. And if Devon ever really got it when they did...

[brunettepet]

Wonderful Oz voice in this, and his observation of and attraction to Willow's outsider qualities was charming. This gave me a laugh: Might as well paint our asses blue and make gibbon noises. Come and get it baby.

Note to self: don’t suggest to Devon. Real possibility of literal interpretation. Not good. I love Oz' dry sense of humor.

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Thank you! It's fun to write Oz - I'm hoping to do some more soon.