Older fic repost

[samsom]

I first posted this about four years ago, so I've reshaped it a bit and gave it a new title.

Title: What Big Teeth, Grandmother
Author: Samsom
Summary: What if Cordelia hadn't arrived at the office until way after Angel blissed out? A short ficlet set during the last few minutes of EternityPairings/characters: A blissed out Angel, a frantic

Comments

[lynnenne]

Oh, this is so, so creepy, especially this:

“Oh you are going to be fun, precious.” He jerks her up into a half sitting position, so close to him that the shimmering flecks of gold in his demon eyes takes up her whole vision.

“And I promise you, I’ll be a very attentive daddy,” he grabs her hand and forces it palm open against his crotch, making her cup him and he’s hard, straining behind his trousers, closing his eyes at her touch. “You won’t have to beg for anything, except for me to stop.”

Great Angelus voice. Well done.

[samsom]

Thank you very much. :)

[moscow_watcher]

Effectively chilling. I think I'll never be able to watch the episode without thinking about that scene.

[samsom]

That''s a huge compliment, thank you!

[ares132006]

She needs to harden herself against him then, but all she can think of is the loss, the unbearable loss, of his soul.

Was he aware of being gone?

Was he scared?

Cordelia's empathy for Angel, losing his soul, is so moving, and yet, by the end of the ordeal, Cordelia will never feel that way again, I'm sure.

Very well done. Loved how sinister you wrote Angelus.

[samsom]

Thank you.

And I think Cordelia manages to deal with both caring for Angel and being terrified of his 'dark side' over the long haul.

[ever_neutral]

Oh, deliciously dark and painful. Perfect ending.

[samsom]

Thank you :)