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Ficlet: Catechism (Jenny)

Apr 20, 2009 19:06

Title: Catechism
A/N: for episode prompt 3 - how does Angel’s story get passed down the generations?

( What is your name?… )

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moscow_watcher April 20 2009, 19:57:22 UTC

Creepy. The last line is a killer! Well-done!

brutti_ma_buoni April 20 2009, 20:07:13 UTC

Thanks so much! Jenny wasn't stupid or unmerciful, so it had to be something really ingrained to get her to act like that. Brainwashing sounds about right.

lynnenne April 20 2009, 23:49:40 UTC

Nicely done.

brutti_ma_buoni April 21 2009, 20:13:33 UTC

Thanks!

thismaz April 21 2009, 04:56:34 UTC

A true catechism of vengeance. Nicely done.

brutti_ma_buoni April 21 2009, 20:14:22 UTC

Thank you - it's a horrible idea, but I'm glad it worked for you.

ares132006 April 21 2009, 09:55:50 UTC

Well done. And poor Jenny. Vengeance killed her in the end.

brutti_ma_buoni April 21 2009, 20:15:44 UTC

An eye for an eye...doesn't go well in the end. Thanks!

sentine April 21 2009, 16:26:19 UTC

It's perfect! This last line gave me a chill.

brutti_ma_buoni April 21 2009, 20:16:21 UTC

Thanks so much!