Comments | fannishliss: spn fic: "not coming between" (5.22+, PG)

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spn fic: "not coming between" (5.22+, PG)

Aug 10, 2010 19:11

title: "not coming between"
author: fannishliss
rated: PG
warnings: spoilers for 5.22. Dean pov, Lisa, Ben
words: 2942

Author's note: this story takes place in late October 2010. Angel Quality of Healing.

disclaimer: This story follows on from the Promise verse. Comments and concrit are sincerely appreciated. Credit is due to the fantastic ( Read more... )

lisa braeden, 5.22+, fic, spn, promise verse, dean

Comments 5

erinrua August 16 2010, 05:10:12 UTC

Yes. I don't know if it will play out like this - probably not - but in my world? This works. So very much works. Well done! :)

fannishliss August 16 2010, 23:12:25 UTC

thanks very much for your encouraging comment!

I don't really know what direction they'll take with Lisa. I'm afraid Dean will sorrowfully say, "this isn't my life" -- but I want to believe that he would give himself a chance at having the best of both worlds. we'll see i guess!

erinrua August 17 2010, 00:30:35 UTC

Or he might sadly say, "I want this to be my life, but I'm just putting them in danger." Either would be terribly sad ... *wibbles*

I like that Lisa is going to be present at least for a while, though. She's been, so far, a strong character who knows her own mind but who also has a huge, compassionate heart. It'll be interesting to see what they do with her and Ben and Dean.

I'm pretty sure it'll be sad and angsty, though. It's just how they roll...

rokhal September 29 2010, 06:00:18 UTC

Ooh, Annette. What she went through was, like, the ultimate maternal trauma, but this is the first time I've seen her mentioned by name in fanfic. I'd forgotten about her.
I love your paranoid gun nut freak version!

fannishliss September 29 2010, 10:41:38 UTC

Annette is really kind of awesome. She also figures in one of my very few Bechdel stories, in which she and Lisa have a long conversation after the events of 3.2, and they barely mention Dean. :)

I remember it did take some digging to learn her name. I had to make up a name for Bobby's wife, who for a long time was just known as Bobby's wife. :P

"paranoid gun nut freak" sounds like the name of a granola! :D ... it features ground flax seed, molasses, brazil nut, hazelnut, black walnut, dried blueberries, and dried peach.