"Dayenu" (PG, Dean/Lisa, 5.22+)

Jun 16, 2010 11:54

title: "Dayenu"
author: fannishliss 
rated: PG,
warnings: none, spoilers for 5.22.   Lisa pov
words: 1300

disclaimer:  This story proceeds from the challenging and evocative scenario set forth at the end of 5.22.  Thanks to Kripke and everyone at spn for their fantastic work. This story follows on from the Promise verse but can stand on its own.

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lisa braeden, 5.22+, fic, women of spn, spn

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borgmama1of5 June 16 2010, 16:17:37 UTC
Love your 'verse! And your Lisa:
"It was the nightmares and the drinking that helped Lisa make up her mind. She knew he was a grownup; he’d taken care of himself all his life; but when she pictured him on his own, his whimpers turning to anguished shouts, ringing out in an empty apartment, bottles of whiskey beckoning him to a deceitful oblivion, she just couldn’t do it."

This is how I picture her. And how I hope she is when S6 starts!

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fannishliss June 17 2010, 10:03:14 UTC
thanks so much for your great comment and your support!

I made a Lisa icon :)

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tahirire June 16 2010, 18:44:35 UTC
I just caught up on all of these! Really interesting 'verse you've woven here. I like the gradual feel of Dean's adjustment. And of course I LOVE Sam's all new/old superhuman powers. ;)

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fannishliss June 17 2010, 10:04:35 UTC
thanks so much for your comment -- I'm really glad the verse seems to work for you!

powerful Sammy is very fun to work with :)

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outlawradio June 17 2010, 00:55:49 UTC
Nonono that is a PERFECT use of the word.

*sigh*

I love this verse.

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fannishliss June 17 2010, 10:05:22 UTC
thanks so much -- I really appreciate your comment!

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davincis_girl June 26 2010, 01:28:15 UTC
I'm so glad you are continuing with this.

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fannishliss June 26 2010, 01:37:24 UTC
thanks very much! the next part is from Castiel's pov -- kind of difficult! :)

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datenshiblue June 30 2010, 03:20:41 UTC
Another lovely story. Dean's hope is so painful.

<3

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fannishliss June 30 2010, 22:53:22 UTC
Dean expects so little that it's kind of awful, and he's trying so very hard. I smish him continually.

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