29. Breakdown / Bob the Skull

[cyloran]

Title: Now Is Found
Author: Cyloran
Fandom: The Dresden Files (tv-verse)
Characters: Harry, Bob
Prompt: 29. Breakdown
Word Count: 339
Rating: PG
Summary: Harry's POV
Disclaimer: The Dresden Files do not belong to me. Just passing through.
Author's Note: Spoilers for "What About Bob?" This is the flip side of What Once Was Lost. Yes, I know

Comments

[lifeinsomniac]

Oh, Harry .

Lovely piece of writing here. I don't care if it's been done to death. I loved this.

[cyloran]

Thank you very much. It's just one of those scenes that I can't get out of my head.

[terioncalling]

Done to death? Bah! I swear this scene gets better and better and more emotional with every person that does it.

[cyloran]

It does, doesn't it? It speaks as much for the actors as the writers, I think, that it keeps inspiring.

[heatherhouse]

That was beautiful. And I agree with terion. I think the more people write this, the better the scene gets. And you just upped the emotion, so congrats. Nice job.

[cyloran]

Thank you very much!

[eliabrith]

Excellent piece, beautiful and well written, both this and it's companion :)

the lean body sighing away the last remaining breath of borrowed mortality.
that is a wonderful discription.

[cyloran]

Thank you muchly. I'm afraid quite a number of my muses are angst bunnies, and this scene just cries out to them.

sad

[tigerlily0]

*sniff* Poor Harry, I can just feel his breakdown, thinking he'd lost the one remaining person that he loved, like he told fake Murphy in that episode (things that go bump?).

Re: sad

[cyloran]

That's part of what inspired this pair of stories, which are basically two sides of the same coin. Harry's telling the fake Murphy that if anything were to happen to Bob . . . and then that emotional silence when he can't find the words to describe exactly how devestating that would be.