Sailor Moon - Venus/Kunzite - 47 Heart

Dec 15, 2008 20:50

Title: In Another Room
Fandom: Sailor Moon
Characters: Venus and Kunzite
Prompt: #47 - Heart
Word Count: 1,282
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A discussion of distance and of difference.
Author's Notes: I've had the opening line for this story stuck in my head for months, but I had no idea where to take it until it started writing. This was also submitted ( Read more... )

sailor moon: sailor venus/kunzite

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sea_thoughts December 16 2008, 23:46:57 UTC
I love Minako's declaration of love. And the rest of the story but especially that.

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dark_branwen December 19 2008, 00:30:05 UTC
That's my favorite part too. :) Thank you!

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cbrandtwright December 17 2008, 12:58:21 UTC
This is really brilliant. I love your character development.

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dark_branwen December 19 2008, 00:30:21 UTC
Thank you so much!

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charliechaplin2 December 18 2008, 23:15:02 UTC
I have one word:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dark_branwen December 19 2008, 00:30:37 UTC
^___^

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lovelylytton January 1 2009, 15:02:07 UTC
heart-wrenching....

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dark_branwen January 1 2009, 23:11:25 UTC
But it'll be okay in the end! :D She just needs a minute to collect herself and he needs to stop moping and dwelling. She'll beat it out of him eventually.

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lovelylytton March 18 2009, 17:16:58 UTC
How about you write that? *grins*
Since I'm stuck at home because I'm sick, I had some time to do some reading today. And guess what wound up on my screen? Forgotten Forever. Your portrayal of Rubeus kicks ass. Phew.

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dark_branwen March 19 2009, 00:51:35 UTC
BWAHAHAHAHA. I knew my rambling would snatch up another one one of these days. xD Did you just read the interlude or the whole thing?

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bjfactory January 6 2009, 06:07:09 UTC
My favorite part is actually the last line. I guess I liked how Takehiko reacted to Minako's words more than Minako's words themselves. But I did love the shoes part. It was very droll. :D

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dark_branwen January 10 2009, 05:36:07 UTC
Well, Takehiko would think shoes should be comfortable and stylish is a bonus - Minako would suffer for beauty and then complain about it later.

I'm happy you liked it. ^_^ Thank you!

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