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[NCIS] Tony DiNozzo, yellow

Sep 16, 2007 14:54

Title: Five Levels of Good Karma
Fandom: Navy: NCIS
Characters: tiny pre-Tony DiNozzo/Ziva David, Tim McGee, Cynthia, Fornell, Gibbs
Prompt: Yellow
Word Count: 1168
Rating: G
Summary: Five people Tony makes happy.
Author's Notes: Dedicated to persikay because really, that kind of intelligence is kinda awesome and I keep spamming people. Sorry.

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Comments 14

persikay September 16 2007, 12:32:41 UTC

Aww, this fic made me happy :D I especially had to laugh at these parts:

a cup of coffee, hazelnut creamer and half the jar of sugar, just like he likes it.

and

He wraps it up cheerfully, whistling so loudly that Ziva shoots him an annoyed look from her desk

Hmm, I really want some hot chocolate now.

lucifers_toy September 16 2007, 12:35:24 UTC

Thank you! XD I'm glad you liked it.

Heh, you've said that twice already. And damn you, you're making me crave it. The question is, can I be bothered to get out of bed...

persikay September 16 2007, 12:37:04 UTC

Damn you for making me crave it in the first place! ;P Hm, I suppose you could wait until the morning, but that wouldn't be the same, would it?

lucifers_toy September 16 2007, 13:20:16 UTC

*blushes* Made it, drank it, and ate food to go with it.

And oh, I'm already damned. There's a seat reserved for me. ;P

mylogiceatsyou September 16 2007, 12:36:40 UTC

I love the way you capture Tony, every time.

and oh god, the pastel colours LOL! Because apparently I can't not mention a line I loved when reading your stories...

lucifers_toy September 16 2007, 13:21:19 UTC

Thank you so much! *beams*

smackalalala September 16 2007, 15:49:22 UTC

More fantastic fic from you! I love Tony. ♥ This was so great. I think my favorite was the McGee one, because omg, Tony & McGee together - even as just friends - absolutely KILLS me. One of my favorite relationships on the show, bar none. But they are all super awesome. Loved it!

lucifers_toy September 17 2007, 05:31:33 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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lucifers_toy September 17 2007, 05:29:06 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was in character :D

kalliekat September 17 2007, 12:05:37 UTC

i've never thought Tony was clueless or stupid or whatever, just misunderstood. and i love this. and my favorite line "he’d re-typed all of the poems in a carefully chosen font, throat thick from the emotion in McGee’s writing," coz that is Tony. and i want hot chocolate too, but it's lunch time.....

lucifers_toy September 17 2007, 13:49:52 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad it was in character. I've always felt the same way. Hee, yeah, I wrote this then went and made some. And it's never too early for hot chocolate!