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Prince of Tennis - Yanagi Renji - 056 - Breakfast

May 28, 2007 19:53

Title:Feeding an Army (of Five)
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Yanagi Renji, Shindo Mizu, rest of the Yanagi family
Prompt: 056. Breakfast
Word Count:949
Rating:PG
Summary: Renji does dishes. No, seriously, Mizu cooks. A lot. More than enough for five people
Author's Notes:
My LDT found here

( Not many people in the house would get up that early )

prince of tennis: yanagi renji

Comments 13

dizzy_grace May 29 2007, 01:40:35 UTC

*laughs* That was wonderful. Renji really did walk into that one. He should have known better, but at least he's letting Mizu have her fun. Great chapter!

willowscry May 29 2007, 11:50:02 UTC

*grins* He should have known better. They do need their time apart too.

Thanks ^.^

andersenmom May 29 2007, 03:57:33 UTC

That was darling. Loved the huge breakfast - and the teasing between the siblings is perfect. Mizu doesn't quite fit in yet, but she will; just give her time.

Renji really is sweet, isn't he?

willowscry May 29 2007, 13:41:05 UTC

Thanks ^.^ I just love the sibling dynamic, honestly. (Probably because I don't have any of my own). And no, Mizu isn't quite fitting in yet.

He's at least trying to be. :)

andersenmom May 29 2007, 14:22:05 UTC

Sometimes I think it might be easier for people who don't have siblings to write that kind of thing, simply because they see it from the outside.

willowscry May 29 2007, 14:40:25 UTC

That's probably true. I'd never really thought of it like that.

reader_a May 31 2007, 15:27:02 UTC

*snickers* that's so fitting.

I think you just described the first time I made breakfast at my future in-laws, except the sister is a younger one and they had a dishwasher.
Other than that. Spot on :)

Ah, the sweetness!

willowscry May 31 2007, 15:40:02 UTC

*laughs* I'm mean to the poor boy, aren't I?

That is really wierd, honestly. And Mizu is going to insist once her and Renji get married that their own house has a dishwasher. :D

Thanks!

reader_a May 31 2007, 15:43:04 UTC

Well... you are, but that's what makes this story so good.
You are making him to be the 'ideal-man', with a twist or two.

I insisted on the same, first home together does not have a dishwasher.
-next place, most definatly will have one.

willowscry May 31 2007, 17:42:09 UTC

*laughs* There has to be a few twists. :) There is no such thing as a "perfect" man. Besides, everyone has their faults, and these two are no exception.

I hope the next place I move will have one, but I'll deal with my dishpan hands if it doesn't.

Thread 5

garowyn June 4 2007, 17:53:32 UTC

Ha, ha, I love the last two paragraphs. =D

willowscry June 4 2007, 20:56:32 UTC

*grins* He really did though.