Prince of Tennis: Ibu Shinji, 038: Touch

May 19, 2007 20:33

Title: Heat
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Ibu Shinji, Echizen Ryoma
Prompt: 038: Touch
Word Count: 1,030
Rating: R-sexual acts, but not graphic
Summary: Shinji, Ryoma, and some mindless passion.
Author's Notes: Shinji is 17, and Echizen is 16.

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prince of tennis: ibu shinji

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asongforcrows May 20 2007, 17:45:05 UTC
Love how Shinji goes into a monomumble about Echizen's horrible shirt instead of "was it good for you, too?"

Poor Shinji. He needs someone to care about him.

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wiccanlilly May 20 2007, 23:53:06 UTC
Shinji is...unique. He probably knew that Echizen would've said something if he had hated it.

Yes, he does...and he will have someone. One day. Not right away. And I will give no more away :)

Thanks for reading! :)

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itstroublesome May 20 2007, 19:22:00 UTC
We are who we are and there was nothing wrong with what we did. It probably wasn't the best time and place, but it was what we both needed so there's no reason for either of to be ashamed about it and we aren't. That was a horrible shirt. It did nothing for his skin color and it clashed with his eyes. I'm pretty sure that whoever bought it doesn't know anything about fashion. It's a good thing there was a whole in it because he couldn't wear it after that and I didn't have to see it. If he did wear it he didn't wear it around me anyway although I don't think he would have worn a shirt with that big of a hole in it.

*grins* Great chapter! I liked it. I think it works really well and it makes sense that they would both feel like that. I have to agree with asongforcrows about the monologue about Echizen's shirt. That was classic. ^_^

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wiccanlilly May 20 2007, 23:50:06 UTC
As long as you both wanted it--and you did--that's all that matters. No one is judging you, and certainly not me. As for his shirt, well...Ryoma is many things, but a fashion plate he is not. He could've gotten that as a gag gift and not realized what the word "gag" was for. I bet he treasured that shirt always, though. *grins*

*blushes* Thank you! I'm glad that it worked in all the good ways. And, well...that is Shinji for you.

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reader_a August 25 2007, 10:25:39 UTC
Shinji dismissed the tear with a snort. “It was an ugly shirt, anyway. Didn’t look good on you at all. I hope that it was an old shirt, or you’re colorblind, because otherwise it looks like your mother was dressing you, and what teenage boy is still dressed by his mother, anyway, that’s a little embarrassing….”
Yes! That is so him! You got him again. I want to be able to write like that.

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wiccanlilly August 25 2007, 15:56:41 UTC
*blushes deeply* Thank you so much! I'm realy glad that you liked that!

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