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Prison Break - General - 036 - Smell

Dec 31, 2005 00:01

Title: Outrage And Prison Soap
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Bellick, Michael
Prompt: 036 - Smell
Word Count: 785
Rating: R
Author's Notes: Honestly? I don't even know where the idea for this one came from. *shakes head*

( Outrage And Prison Soap )

prison break: general series

Comments 10

thelana December 31 2005, 07:09:46 UTC

Somehow the mental image Bellick crushing on Michael makes me want to scrub my eyes out.

But the whole soap thing? Pure genius :D

quincykat December 31 2005, 07:17:48 UTC

Somehow the mental image Bellick crushing on Michael makes me want to scrub my eyes out.

Oh my GOD. Tell me about it! I was writing it, and I'm like, "ewwww! ew ew ew!" But I kept going with it, lol! My beta was all, "what the fuck IS this?!"

I'm putting the blame on one too many bottles of Dr Pepper. =:)

But I do wonder what kind of soap they use in prison!

thelana December 31 2005, 07:22:59 UTC

But I do wonder what kind of soap they use in prison!

Somehow I bet it smells really nasty too :D

But the "Go, get clean, dammit" made me laugh. As well as the mental image of Bellick doing the happy dance at the news of Michael's transferal. That was after I was finished scrubbing my eyes out.

thelana December 31 2005, 07:24:21 UTC

BTW, it totally fits you "EVERYBODY is hot for Michael" theme. You know, Sucre, Haywire, Sara, T-Bag and now Bellick.

Now you gotta do all the other characters like Pope and nurse Katie too :D

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certainthings January 2 2006, 22:38:30 UTC

Yeah. Wow.

I'm really sort of in love with the idea of Bellick having a crush on Michael.

I wonder if later Michael would catch on and maybe smile a little extra at Bellick teasing him.

quincykat January 3 2006, 00:33:39 UTC

I probably won't be able to keep a straight face the next time Bellick gets up close to Michael. I'll be wondering if he's trying to sniff!

halfshellvenus February 2 2006, 20:20:30 UTC

How did I miss this one? Must be because I'm so far behind in my fandom reading.

I got a kick out of this one, particuarly Bellick's increasing self-hatred and arousal (that just makes him angrier) as the piece goes on.

My first major hormonal crush was on a 17-year-old I met in Hawaii when I was 13. The way he smelled, kind of like clean laundry, was just... Guh.

quincykat February 4 2006, 04:39:24 UTC

I am sooo far behind in my fanfic reading. I keep bookmarking things, but I fear I'll never catch up!

I was first attracted to my husband because of his smell. He would slide into class 15 minutes late and sit in front of me, and I'd sniff him for an hour! He worked a construction job that ended right before class started, but instead of coming in stinking like sweat, he'd go home and shower.

Glad you liked it! =:)