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gidget_zb in fandom_bitches

My Heart Moves From Cold to Fire

May 23, 2009 00:11

The first time (so far from the last) she feels her heart race in William Adama’s presence, it is shocking - her heart slams into her ribcage as if it were a wild animal, beating itself against its prison walls. The room is dim, and he looks good, kneeling on the floor of his cabin (so much younger than now, less weight spread across his frame as ( Read more... )

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gidget_zb May 22 2009, 22:24:54 UTC

What kind of review is this? *huffs*

Though, I applaud your stalking skills while I wait here for you to finish actally reading the thing haha.

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gidget_zb May 22 2009, 22:31:05 UTC

Technically it is SATURDAY. So it was two fics, two days hahahaha. I just knew I wouldn't have much time to post this tomorrow. Saturdays are always so darn busy.

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sleepismyfriend May 22 2009, 22:40:04 UTC

Wow. Just wow.

gidget_zb May 22 2009, 22:44:11 UTC

Oh, thank you! Speechlessness is always a compliment.

sleepismyfriend May 23 2009, 01:19:44 UTC

I have missed the FB! Speechlessness is always a compliment, I concur.

whatever_lj May 23 2009, 00:47:48 UTC

You leave me wanting a hat trick, friend!

bugsfic May 23 2009, 02:27:59 UTC

In shorter fanfics, I really think the last sentence or two are the most important part of the fic, and this one really has a great payoff. I love being able to sit back and say, the whole story goes right to *there*.

captaintish May 23 2009, 05:14:40 UTC

I like the whole motif of her heart wanting to be with his.

oh if her godsdamned heart would just stop trying to leave her body to join this man’s, she’d be fine

Very nice!!

BTW, claraon and I were just saying the other day, how we miss this comm. Right, claraon?

Oh, and I still need to read your other fic, but I'm afraid I won't know what's going on since I haven't read Outside the Garden. I've upped my rating tolerance to R, but NC17 is just too much for me. :)

.........Okay, this is totally random but the TV just caught my attention-- A commercial for the news -- "A woman, a monkey suit, and a giant banana. Tonight at 11."

pandj1958 May 23 2009, 06:27:51 UTC

Wow two fics in a matter of hours. Today is a good day.

she clutched her book to her chest, because surely - surely this time her heart would break through the calcium fence holding it in, and she needed the extra layer between him and her, lest it leave her for him.
Thought this bit especially lovely.