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Fic: And in the Sparkling of the Day We All Go

Jun 30, 2008 09:17

Title: And in the Sparkling of the Day We All Go
Beta: gidget_zb AND alias424. Yeah that's right, it took TWO people to fix this. Take that as your warning ( Read more... )

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Comments 43

angiescully June 30 2008, 08:30:50 UTC

*SHUTS EYES TIGHT*

Why don't you go write me something I can actually read right now? ;)

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 08:34:10 UTC

ITS MARKED WITH A SPOILER UP TO 4X10 ON IT YA FECKER :P

angiescully June 30 2008, 08:35:33 UTC

Well, that's my point, bitch - I'm only up to season 3! LOL Or well, all of season 2. LOL Frak you! ;)

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 08:40:43 UTC

LOL TOUGH!

You'll just have to watch all of season 3 and 4 this week. Or no new fic for youuuuuuuu.

BUT.

Since you're you and I love you and you're fabulous...if you want to throw a prompt my way for a non spoilery fic you'd like written then go right ahead.

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alias424 June 30 2008, 11:16:12 UTC

Ohhhh, boys are silly. And slow. And think they're so smart that it's almost cute. You've got them so perfectly here. And don't be ridiculous. It took you to make the awesome, Gidget to make sure people outside of the three of us could understand the awesome, and me to change like one thing, lol. Together, we're magical.

"You couldn't find the President of the Colonies guest quarters."

"I didn't look." A beat. The snake slithers from the room. Vanishes.

Boyish looks pass between them, ghosts of those lost from their youth - girls are hard work, sometimes you have to be tricky. Both men smile. They are both men.And I know you know that I love that, but I'm quoting it anyway. Deal, woman. One, he didn't look. Awesome. Two, the snake image gets me every time with its fantasticness. Three, the shared boy looks are the cutest frakking things ever ( ... )

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 11:31:13 UTC

Awwww BB, this totally just....you're awesome, you know that right? I am less in the funk now.
And shut up, it did take the pair of ya to fix this, gods knows who else POV I'd have been writing this in if y'all hadn't taken hold of it!!! Fucking Romo's cat would have been giving his thoughts!!

Heee. When your choice is Laura and her legs of awesome all up in your place, and Laura and her legs of awesome somewhere else....OF COURSE HE DIDN'T LOOK.

And they're both totally 12.

gidget_zb June 30 2008, 12:14:15 UTC

ILU. AND THIS. AND IT DID NOT NEED FIXING, JUST US - THEM TRANSLATON LOL.

"They're usually right about this stuff."

"What about Laura?"

"Always right about this stuff." He grins at his friend. He is his friend.

So my favorite part, between both boys admitting their wimmens is always right to the last bit of Bill realizing Saul is his friend, Cylon or no. LOVE IT.

*HUGS YOU*

Wait did I skim past the words fic, write and BILLY?!!1 *FLAILS*

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 12:53:11 UTC

LOL I love that we need to translate fic for mass consumption :D

Thanks BB. *squishes you big time*

And YES YES YOU DID.

Chicka, chicka, chickabee ambiguousgem76 June 30 2008, 16:28:43 UTC

...I just got a mental image of you three as both each others' Nell AND Liam Neeson.

Re: Chicka, chicka, chickabee babylon_whore June 30 2008, 16:29:33 UTC

That....is pretty much how we are :D

gennifer_g June 30 2008, 13:58:13 UTC

Ah, the hesitation and sharing of two soldiers -- fantastic!!

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 15:55:27 UTC

Thanks so much!

wicked_g June 30 2008, 14:31:09 UTC

"You couldn't find the President of the Colonies guest quarters."

"I didn't look."

Hah! Oh Bill.

*huggles Bill and Saul*

babylon_whore June 30 2008, 15:55:57 UTC

Hee, ah that Bill. He so sneaky. (she totally knows he didn't look)

Glad you liked it!!

wicked_g June 30 2008, 17:34:02 UTC

Yes, it's so cute when men think they're being sneaky, but really, they're so not.