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aragons December 8 2011, 23:48:28 UTC
He leaves his hand there, as though still covering the wound.
OH LORD ABOVE JUST KILL ME NOW MICHELLE AND HAVE DONE WITH IT.

Everything about this is just perfection like, it's just so solid and them and this is so clearly the truth right here. Their voices are so clearly them and like, the slow slide into them being uncomfortably familiar with each other and picking up scraps of details about each other along the way is just precisely how it should go. So many favourite things about this behemoth of a fic (u r so beautiful 2 meeee) but, because I copypasta'd it immediately; I love that conversation during the stakeout? Where they're both talking about similar things, having those conversations at each other that are weirdly revealing (and also hilarious, Michelle, so much of this fic was just gold. see: everything Augie and Lou said or did. See: " I don’t care what anyone says, that shit is real. The ocean is powerful. I respect it, man. And I am totally afraid of it.” SHUT UP so perfect, I could hear Jane's intonation and e v e r y t h i n g) and then it ends with her joke about the shootout and I'm like, SOBBING EVERYWHERE.

I AM ALL OUT OF WORDS. VERKLEMPT. I WISH I COULD SAY SOMETHING USEFUL HERE. BUT I CANNOT.

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falseeeyelashes December 10 2011, 00:42:28 UTC
OH, IZI, THANK YOU!!!!

I am so glad to hear you enjoyed this and all their voices came through! That stakeout scene was definitely my favorite to write hahaha. DIALOGUE IS FUN!!! But thank you so much, girl!!!

I AM GLAD YOU WATCH THIS SHOW SO I CAN FLAIL AT YOU ABOUT ALL THE FEELS!!!

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