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[fallingdreamer]

i think the heat has fried my brian.  So I wrote this.  It's in first person, which i haven't really done because I don't like it/it scares me. =p
(tell me what you think)

Heat 
by me

It’s hot. Actually it almost seem like the temperature was beyond hot. Frankly after three days, it’s a bit ridiculous either way. The landlord has yet to stop by to

Comments

[trevelyan]

Good piece of writing that uses description in a constant, yet innofensive way to let the reader associate with the character's situation.

It is fucking hot indeed =\

[kariberri]

noelle, i really liked this. i love how the climax is only a half-second event. You constructed this piece so well.