You don’t know how pleased I’m you’re using my icons. It is so cool.
So onto the important parts, I loved this so much. My favorite part was the ending. It was so bleak and wrenching after how they seemed to be heading to a happy ending. I was going “oh noes.” Your characterizations of Ava and Jo were wonderful. Ava’s flight and her reactions to the visions were so reasonable in the situations. I enjoyed how you kept her feeling normal by her reactions.
I adored how you have Jo here as a tough hunter with vulnerabilities as well. How you handled saving Jo was awesome letting them both getting to participated and the gun training was a nice touch.
They're both my favorites so I'm so pleased with what you've done with the promo.
I had to use the icons! They were made for the story after all. <3!
I'm really glad that you liked it! I wanted the ending to be canon, I love writing things that 'might have' happened, so she had to disappear. I really liked the shock and the bleakness that came with ending it like that.
:) I'm really glad that you liked my characterizations, I worry about my voices a lot. <3, I just wanted to thank you for entering, and creating such lovely art for me to work from, and it was a rarepair and just win. <3
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So onto the important parts, I loved this so much. My favorite part was the ending. It was so bleak and wrenching after how they seemed to be heading to a happy ending. I was going “oh noes.” Your characterizations of Ava and Jo were wonderful. Ava’s flight and her reactions to the visions were so reasonable in the situations. I enjoyed how you kept her feeling normal by her reactions.
I adored how you have Jo here as a tough hunter with vulnerabilities as well. How you handled saving Jo was awesome letting them both getting to participated and the gun training was a nice touch.
They're both my favorites so I'm so pleased with what you've done with the promo.
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I'm really glad that you liked it! I wanted the ending to be canon, I love writing things that 'might have' happened, so she had to disappear. I really liked the shock and the bleakness that came with ending it like that.
:) I'm really glad that you liked my characterizations, I worry about my voices a lot. <3, I just wanted to thank you for entering, and creating such lovely art for me to work from, and it was a rarepair and just win. <3
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I really didn't want to go full AU with it, so I felt that this would give it that bleak feel that I thought Ava had to her when she was in cold oaks.
-still maintains that Ava wasn't evil til she got to cold oaks and was forced to kill people- Call me an optimist. ^.^
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