Just like the first time - Tora x Saga - Oneshot

[fallen_am_i]

Title: Just like the first time
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: fallen_am_i 
Genre: Romance,Fluff, Dramma,Angst
Warnings: No beta
Rating: PG
Pairing: Tora x Saga
Synopsis: " You could't realise it, but every day you were falling in love with me, over and over again, with the same pation as the first time. "
Disclaimer: I own the story only...

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Comments

[yuki_chinpo]

Oh my...
I am crying like mad right now.
You did a great work :3 But you should put big ANGST into warnings :D This was supposed to be sad, right? So.. it works ^^
This was just awesome :)

[fallen_am_i]

Omg i editted my entry just now, i frogot to put angst on it :P
Thank you so much! :D I am happy that you liked it :3

[yuki_chinpo]

Hah..you are welcome ^^
I'd love to read some ShouPon from you :DD...uhm.. okay, that was a lame try o.O :D

[fallen_am_i]

hahah well,a bit patience and we'll see...I have something on my mind... ^-^

[scarly_x]

Aw! When you explained about the car crash i was like' :O No way!' You've laid it out perfectly!

[fallen_am_i]

Thank you so much! :D Well, i was anxious with that part, i SO wanted to hide the reality the better i could till the revealing at the end!So it's good i guess that i surprised you :D
Thank you for reading :3

[erikaoi]

This is so sad!Tora I feel for you.I insist you continue.they need to be happy together at the end.

[fallen_am_i]

I know...I want to see them happy too...I'll think about a good continue for this one and when i'll find it, i'll write it... :) I just want it to be something good, i like this story very much...
Thank you for reading :3

[musicadio9]

he should get nao to be a live in doctor and they could live together and tora could have a notebook and write down everything that happened and Saga could read it every morning.

SOLUTION

[fallen_am_i]

Actually in my first draft i had a small scene in the end with the notebook thing,and i didn't know if i would keep it...I am thinking to continue this one and give them the happy end they deserve,but it's just a thought for the moment,although i wrote some lines...
Thnx 4 reading :)

[fallen_am_i]

Oh and i liked the idea with the live in doctor :D

[musicadio9]

yeah:D i mean he could like come to house or something

and you should write eeeettttt! make it into a series!YEAH!!

[themikachu]

I was confused at the beginning, but then it all pulled together and made sense! I love pieces like this! :D
Is it really only a oneshot? 'Cause this is a story I'd love to see more of!

[fallen_am_i]

Well,when i wrote it i was thinking to leave it like that,but then i started thinking like ohhhh,i can't leave those two like that...So,yes, i'm going to continue that,i just wait for the right time to begin,i'm on a small writer's block these days, and i want it to be good...I have started writing it though,i have a whole paragraph! I hope i will have soon a sequel on it,with a chapter one on the headline! xD
Thank you! :) I think the most confusing was the first and second person i used...The sequel will be in third,i think it's easier... :)