Under my nose - Tora x Saga - Pt1

[fallen_am_i]

Title: Under my nose ( i might change it later :P)
Chapters: Pt 1
Author: fallen_am_i  
Genre: Romance, Dramma
Warnings:Boys love, sexual intercourse between men later.
Rating: PG-13 to NC - 17, for this one, PG - 13
Pairing: Tora x Saga, Shou x Saga (onesided), slight Shou x Hiroto
Synopsis: Onesided love hurts,and Saga tries to find a simple way to forget that

Comments

[erwilde]

I felt sorry for Saga when he saw Shou and Hiroto kissing, poor guy D8
But I think Tora has something in mind to make him forget about that, right ? 8B

Next chapter ? 8D

[fallen_am_i]

Well, he might have something in mind,we'll see xD I'll try to update soon!
Thanks for reading! :)

[undertheseaside]

This is NAISU and great. Sad and Funny at the same time.

I seriously hope that Tora is in love with Saga and they are not just merely fuckbuddy.

Poor Saga, he need to forget about Shou, he gives Saga much pain T^T

waiting for update.

[fallen_am_i]

Well, there are about 3 more parts for this one to end, so we'll see what happens next... xD I'll try to update in a week :)
Thanks for reading! :)

[xme_chanx]

:D Ah, Tora/Saga YAY!

It is not AU, since they are still Alice Nine and doing Alice Nine-y things. If they were Alice Nine in Space though, it would be AU. Does that make sense? As long as you stick to what kind of sort of happens in RL, it's not an AU.

[fallen_am_i]

Ah ok then,thanks! xD I read somewhere that AU it had to do with what if cases so that confused me a bit,so thnx for halping me clear this out! ^^
And yeah,Tora/Saga... <3 It's becoming obvious time by time that they are my OTP :3

[musicadio9]

well . . . this is an AU in the fact that Saga never liked shou that way and wasnt really angsty about that, in my opinion. but thats it.

and im glad to see you're writing again!!

[fallen_am_i]

well,it's been a while... but i am back xD
thanks for reading :)

[musicadio9]

a pleasure, my friend^^

[themikachu]

Ah, I loved it!
I love the way you write Saga as kind of awkward and spacey.
And seeing the pain Saga went through was very sad, but enjoyable to read. (In a context way, not a sadistic way! xD)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[fallen_am_i]

It's the image i have of Saga in my mind,spaced out! So cute :3
I am looking forword too! I still don't know how the next is going to turn out :O I have allready some scenes written but i have many to write and edit... You have a big work ahead of you! :P

[themikachu]

(Oops, that was meant to be a reply)
I think it's just PERFECT for your writing style.
Bring it on! Haha. If anything, when I beta the next part, you can tell me which scenes you need help with, and I can help you brainstorm and make it better until it's up to your expectations. Then you can post it when you're ready.
There's no rush! :D

[fallen_am_i]

Oh that would be helpfull, realy! xD everytime i rewrite it, it gets better and better,but i think it still needs work...And i have to cmplete it too! thank you thank you thank you and i love you girl! :3