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this below made mel laugh when she was helping me reason out a scene.
Quote:The other officer comes back in and settles in the abandoned chair. “I apologize for my colleague. He’s having a stressful day. Can we get you anything? Water? Cigarettes?”
“No thanks.” So they are trying the nice guy routine now. I snort mentally.
“Eh cigarettes are bad for you anyways. I’m Detective John Phillips and you are?”
“Shouldn’t you already know?”
“Well yes, but I was hoping you’d tell me yourself.”
I give an unladylike snort in reply.
Falcon