Fan Fiction: Charades - Part Tres

Jan 07, 2011 21:11

They made breakfast together, though it was really more like lunch, perhaps even dinner. Fernando made coffee and Sergio made the omelette. They sat together by the counter, eating and sipping coffee. They talked a bit about the weather and about football. But most importantly, they held hands.


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fic - sernando

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kissmecait17 January 8 2011, 00:43:20 UTC
Oh. Oh. Oh.
I loved chapter 2 to this and I was extremely excited to see chapter 3.

I love all of this, I love that Fernando is so openly torn, that he is honest with himself and that he is so sure of Olalla until he sees Sergio again.

I love the morning after more than words could explain. Everything about it seems easy and it makes my heart soar.

Fernando can feel Sergio grin against him and at that moment something begins to flutter inside him. They lie in silence for a while after that.
Visualizing Sergio giving that small smile against Fernando is perfect because this is what Sergio wanted so badly and Fernando's reaction is just what he needed.
But of course, the best line is the last:
But most importantly, they held hands.

♥ ♥ ♥

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falafhel January 9 2011, 00:38:21 UTC
I'm always so nervous about posting the next chapter in fear of whether or not it can hold it's own to the previous one, so I'm trilled that you enjoyed it!

Thank you! <3

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cherebeaux January 8 2011, 11:49:29 UTC
this is this is I can't

this is too much <3

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falafhel January 9 2011, 00:41:51 UTC
*blushes*
Thank you, hun! ♥

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sophie_lfc March 18 2011, 15:11:25 UTC
THIS IS JUST AMAZING! <3

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falafhel March 19 2011, 12:02:17 UTC
THANK YOU, HUN! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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sophie_lfc March 20 2011, 18:41:08 UTC
You're welcome! :D

(I don't have any Sernando icons. :/)

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falafhel March 22 2011, 13:17:23 UTC
Haha, don't worry about it, love. :)

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