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Father Knows Best

Mar 26, 2007 21:42

Father Knows Best

Name: Falafel
Title: Father Knows Best
Synopsis: Pre-crash story set in London, England. When Desmond goes missing after being expelled from University, Penny suspects her father of deliberately trying to break up their relationship. While searching the city for her lost lover, Penny has a strange encounter with a teenage Charlie ( Read more... )

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babydazzle March 27 2007, 06:13:35 UTC

falafel_fiction March 27 2007, 18:16:40 UTC

Thanks! I know the idea of Charlie being Widmore's illegitimate son and Penny's half brother is too much to hope for (especially considering we already have Jack and Claire as siblings) but would just love it. I think that Penny/Charlie would make a good (platonic) pair. Their characters go together nicely.

babydazzle March 28 2007, 04:15:31 UTC

kawaiispinel January 11 2008, 20:25:52 UTC

HEE! I loved it! It was just so cute and the idea of Charlie being Penny's half-brother is just so delightful.

And I loved this bit:

“He is a bloody nutter!” Penny laughed. “But I love him.”

falafel_fiction January 12 2008, 11:53:24 UTC

Thanks! Not many people have read this fic so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to have included Penny more in my writing. It's always difficult with off-island characters. It's so cool to find another Penny fan though! Here are some more Penny fic recs if you're interested, just cos I know good Penny stories can be hard to find...

To the ends of the earth - by pacejunkie
http://pacejunkie.livejournal.com/25823.html

Ebb and tide- by elliotsmelliot
http://elliotsmelliot.livejournal.com/5225.html

I also have two more Des/Penny/Charlie fics =

Good Vibrations
http://falafel-fiction.livejournal.com/5327.html#cutid1

Unstuck in Time
http://falafel-fiction.livejournal.com/9154.html#cutid1

Thanks again!