Beyond the Horizon (1/2)
Beyond the Horizon
Summary: Between his memories of Desmond on the freighter and his visits from Charlie in the future Sayid resolves to break free from Ben and return to the island to rescue his friends. A sequel story to 'The Musician' in two parts. Also an entry for charlielives challenge #4: Future Charlie.
Characters: Sayid, Charlie, Ben and ( Read more... )
This...this was just...I don't think that awesome even begins to cover it. I seriously just want to...to tackle glomp you and then jump up and down with you in my arms and squeal in your ear and say thank you about a million times because you - you are amazing and this was amazing too.
Err, I take it you liked it then? Heh! It must have been good if it inspired the longest LJ comment known to man! I guess I will have to come out of retirement more often to savour this wonderful feedback.
I'm so glad you liked the bits that you liked because you picked out some of my favourite parts too! I think that Charlie and Hurley sitting at those picnic tables painting pictures together has become my new happy place and I'm glad you could picture it.
I promise I'm not intentionally trying to kill you, my dear, but I do like to give our boys their little angsty sensitive moments when they reflect on their lost loves, which all three of them have now. New FF Charlie may be too cool for school, but I liked giving him a little vulnerability when Claire or Aaron are mentioned.
I'm also glad you liked that part comparing Sayid's torturing skills to Charlie's musical skills. I really liked the idea of Sayid being kinda humbled by Charlie and longing for a sweeter more peaceful life free from the brutality he has been forced into.
Yes, this fic accepts your proposal and I'll be happy to act as minister and marry you some time early next week when hopefully I'll get Part 2 finished off. Thanks again for your lovely exhaustive feedback. I'm giddy happy over it!
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I promise I'm not intentionally trying to kill you, my dear, but I do like to give our boys their little angsty sensitive moments when they reflect on their lost loves, which all three of them have now. New FF Charlie may be too cool for school, but I liked giving him a little vulnerability when Claire or Aaron are mentioned.
And that just makes my little shippy heart want to burst into song ^_^ so thank you
I really liked the idea of Sayid being kinda humbled by Charlie and longing for a sweeter more peaceful life free from the brutality he has been forced into.
I think Sayid could have been such a gentle, decent person if he hadn't been forced into doing such atrocious things throughout his life. He's definitely a tortured soul.
Yes, this fic accepts your proposal and I'll be happy to act as minister and marry you some time early next week when hopefully I'll get Part 2 finished off.
Yay! ^___^ I can't wait to read the second part!
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