The Paradox

[falafel_fiction]

The Paradox

Summary: Charlie chases a Scottish man through the rainy streets of London, which leads him to a fateful meeting in an antique shop. Written for the

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[sapphire_child]

O.O!!!!!!!!!!!!

*falls off chair*

Holy freaking bloody goddamn HELL Cappy!

*falls off chair again*

MAN. You should come out of retirement more often! This just...and you...with the...

*incoherent garbling*

Right. I think I need to review properly now.

You - are brilliant. This fic - was brilliant. The premise behind it is remarkably clever, well thought out and in the context of Lost it now seems more plausible than ever before. The idea that Desmond reliving his life in FBYE changed Charlie's fate so that he sort of split into two? It's exactly the mind boggling sort of thing that would just ROCK out on the show if they did it. I got chills when Mrs Hawking started talking about the alternate Charlie who went to the island to present-day Charlie. Especially when she echoed her threat to Desmond that if Charlie didn't go to the island and die and then the other Charlie go and save them with Penny that they would all die

[falafel_fiction]

*puts sapph back on her chair and straps her to it to keep her from falling out again*

Thank you so much. Your reviews are always a giddy treat. Definitely worth coming out of retirement for!

I'm really pleased you liked the theory and thought that I put it across well. It would be awesome to write a follow up sometime. I'll make no promises (I'm very busy with my novel right now) but I do have a few ideas. Maybe in a couple of months I'll have a go at it. We'll see.

Ooh, glad you liked the humour too. I didn't want this fic to seem too heavy and complicated, so...

Thanks again!!

[sapphire_child]

Probably because I'm usually giddy after reading your fics =P I was rather flailing about in my seat after I finished this.

Well hell if you ever wanted to co-author again I'd be all up for that! Less work for you after all =)

You're most welcome ^___^ thank you for sharing this with us!

[falafel_fiction]

Hmmm...tempting.

I got to admit I've been having some ideas for a sequel fic, but it could turn into a very looong saga. There are so many possibilities for this storyline it'd be hard to find an ending. Still I'll post you my ideas (give me a few days!) I'm not against the suggestion of co-ficcing (it does lighten the load), but I might have to put it off for a while.

[sapphire_child]

LOL. I already have and you've bunnied me too! XD

Go check out the graphic I made! I posted it up there :D