Thanks so much for posting these! Given the lack of fic out there, your contributions would be welcome even if they were as "mediocre" as advertised, but there's also several moments throughout the batch that are really fantastic. For example: the image of Jesse spinning in his chair, eating raisins is so perfect and kind of heartbreaking, and fits so well as the image of Jesse that Walt would obsess over; Jesse saving the last bite of his breakfast so he can justify hanging around, and Walt actually seeing through him in that moment; Walt reflecting on just how *little* Jesse is (which is one of the things about him that gets to me, too, along with how delicate his hands look); Hank's observation that Jesse's a decent liar with a terrible poker face. I will offer the criticism that your character voices didn't feel quite right, but overall very worthwhile. Keep writing, and let's hope you can inspire some others to do the same.
Wow, thanks. XD I'm happy that you found something that you liked in these.~ Voices are always a hard thing for me when the characters aren't mine and they're written to be so complex in the show that it's hard to capture them in a fic. Anyway, thanks again for reading- I'll try to keep an update whenever I get a sort of good idea.
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Anyway, thanks again for reading- I'll try to keep an update whenever I get a sort of good idea.
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