Thank you. As much fun as it's been to develop the characters, I'm thrilled that I'm getting to the meat of the plot. It'll get very exciting very soon.
This is one of my favorite stories--the conceit, the characters, the voices.
"I think you already know how I feel about you." Tad looked down and twirled the broom slowly in his hands. "I can't help it; I've never been able to help it, but I'll do my best to hide it."
This broke my heart--I can just see the real Paul's face saying this, guh!
Another great chapter--will we see Jon in church in the next chapter? Hope so. And, hey, John--go call on Amy already wouldjya?
Another favorite bit:
"Jon gazed at his friend affectionately. "I told you you're enlightened."
Stephen blushed and glowered at him. "Oh, stop looking at me with those moony blue eyes of yours. I'm doing it because it's good business."
Jon lowered his eyes, but continued to smile. "Of course, Stephen, whatever you say."
Thank you so much for all your lovely comments. This story is easily the most complicated one I've ever written. I usually don't outline, but I finally did with this one. Keeping everything straight in my head is making my brain hurt.
will we see Jon in church in the next chapter? Hope so. And, hey, John--go call on Amy already wouldjya?
I hadn't planned on showing Jon in church, but I'll see what I can do. And John will finally spark Miss Amy.
I'm not sure if I've commented before, but I love this series. The characters are excellently built; you can tell they're themselves, just - as another fandom of mine would have put it - dimensional alternates. And the writing, and the plotting - so imaginative! Keep it up. :)
Thank you so much for commenting and for saying all those lovely things. I'm especially glad to hear that everyone seems in character. (except evil Paul, of course=))
I just love Tad and Steve so much. When I first started writing the story, I was afraid they wouldn't work together, so I'm extra glad they seem to now. I'm freaking out as well because I know what's going to happen next. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments.
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HOT.
And oh so sad at the end. :( You already know I love it to pieces.
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"I think you already know how I feel about you." Tad looked down and twirled the broom slowly in his hands. "I can't help it; I've never been able to help it, but I'll do my best to hide it."
This broke my heart--I can just see the real Paul's face saying this, guh!
Another great chapter--will we see Jon in church in the next chapter? Hope so. And, hey, John--go call on Amy already wouldjya?
Another favorite bit:
"Jon gazed at his friend affectionately. "I told you you're enlightened."
Stephen blushed and glowered at him. "Oh, stop looking at me with those moony blue eyes of yours. I'm doing it because it's good business."
Jon lowered his eyes, but continued to smile. "Of course, Stephen, whatever you say."
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will we see Jon in church in the next chapter? Hope so. And, hey, John--go call on Amy already wouldjya?
I hadn't planned on showing Jon in church, but I'll see what I can do. And John will finally spark Miss Amy.
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